Ayo i need yall to tell me what i need to do to make my book better because i feel like im trying to hard wit ts
I can take when people tellin me some thats gone help me
An i be tryin to make my chapters longer but that shit hard ash an ik i be takin to long with the updates but i trying to think of what to do with the chapter
I be tryin but at the same time ion want yo feel as though i trying to hard
I really need feed back
