𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗰𝗲 𝗳𝗶𝗲𝗹𝗱'𝘀 𝗛𝗲𝗿𝗼𝗲𝘀【 Discontinued 】

Discontinue?

So this book hasn't been updated for a month? And I've been debating about whether I should continue it or not.

So the thing that has been bothering me is basically the logic of the story (is that how you call it?)

So the things that has been bothering me:
- Why can't all the kids go to their own family instead of continued being taken care by Isabella

- Why is it that only the oldest ones are exceptions of being taken care by someone else when the parents just can't let Isabella take care of them (because she takes care of the younger children in Musutafa)

- Why was it that they immediately brought the four of them (Norman, Ray, Emma and Y/n) to the hospital and without permission did a surgery on them?

- How is it that Kota immediately liked Y/n while he hates other people who he never met

- Why wouldn't they investigate further what things happened in the demon world?

- Why would the kids be send to a regular school despite knowing they have been educated and (something else I forgot)

- Why wouldn't the quartet attend a regular high school and instead being offered to go to a school for heroes despite none of them ever thinking about being one and none of them knowing that it would be very dangerous

- And why would All Might easily agree to take care of the kids??

Yeah I realised how much this story didn't make much of a sense and that's why I basically haven't updated it.

I probably am discontinuing this book and instead continue writing my other tpn x mha book with a more logical story. (still not very logical but I guess better)

I hope you aren't too disappointed and I hope you'll find something else to read that's better than this :)

P.s.

If you want to adopt this book, rewrite it or do something with it, feel free to do so.

I've most likely given up on it and probably won't be updating it anymore so feel free to make it your own book.

I would appreciate if you would tag me in it so I can check it out but if you don't want to it's completely fine.

Have a nice day :)