Dear readers,
I am well aware, that there are a lot of spelling even grammar mistakes in the past chapters. I am not a native speaker of English and I write at night, when my concentration is at its lowest. But I hope my mistakes are not as bad or annoying, so you are able to follow the story ...
I'll try to edit everything; I'll go back to the beginning and start the process. It would really be a boost to my motivation, if you tell me „honestly" your opinion about the story:
Is it interesting enough? How do you perceive the romance aspect? How the dystopian factor? What do you think happened in the past, to make this strange development of Desa evoke?
I hope you have fun and feel "entertained" reading the story. IF not, please tell me why...Knowing your opinion and thoughts helps me to be a better writer.
I wish you the best!
Patti Dimitriou
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Destined
FantasyHis blank face was devoid of any emotion, his green cold eyes, the eyes of a predator, were taking me in. "Don't run, Callida, I'll catch you", his smooth but manly voice warned. Callida is a human girl living in the harsh world of Desa. Destiny has...
