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▍❯ Not yet DEAD

Reviewer: frost_1543
Author: sinfully-sarcastic

Book Title: Not Yet DEAD

Cover: 5/5
The cover is really amazing, it portrays the story very well.

Title: 5/5
The title is very amazing and to the point, those who read your book will know what it exactly means.

Description: 2/5
Sorry, but the description basically tells you the whole story, readers won't be willing to read your book when the whole plot is already revealed. Try to keep it suspenseful and mysterious, and also keep either of the quotes I mention below as a blurb from your book:

1) You will never know how strong you are unless you don't have any other choice but to be strong.
2) Beauty as we say is not your appearance,
it is your smile after your cry, it is your scar that
you get while learning something new.

Grammar/Vocabulary: 12/15
Your grammar and vocabulary need a lot of work. There are some grammar mistakes, they can be fixed with a little bit of editing. The grammer mistakes disturbs the flow in some areas, so do edit it soon as possible.

Use of literary techniques: 8/10
Like I sad, your writing needs a little bit of work. Your book is amazing, so do make it more readable, some readers will get angry and not read the book if they find it disturbing or hard to read.

Character Development: 14/15
The book narrates the story from two different timelines, so you can really see the protagonists development. You can also relate to it a lot.

Emotions Evoked: 10/10
From the title and description itself you can tell that the book is going to be sad, and the author successfully made me cry within first few chapters. This book makes you come back to your senses on what reality is actually like, and that life is not easy. It makes you feel the emotions un your heart. All I wanted to do was hug Alya tight and tell her it is going to be ok.

Writing style: 8/10
The words that the author uses in her quotes hits so deep, it is very unique and absolutely remarkable.

Plot+Originality: 13/15
The plot is very unique, it is about life and makes us realise how blessed we are to have very small and simple things in our life. It might be small to us, but it means the world to someone else.

General satisfaction: 8/10
The book is amazing, if you want a reality check or you want to read a book that hits close to home, this is the perfect book, with amazing quotes, and full of emotions. I read the first ten chapters and am going to read the next after writing this review.

Total marks: 85/100

I would definitely recommend reading this book because it is amazing and had me completely hooked. Amazing work. Keep writing. All the best. I hope your book receives the recognition it deserves.  

-Thank you.