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Chapters Reviewed: 1. Blue Hour - 2. The Bright Side of The Moon
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I. Title: This Is What It's Like To Be Lovers
Beautiful title! A bit of a handful of words, but I love the execution. Especially since you told me the genre, I think it really fits the romance element you want to bring forth and also it sort of reminds me of the Disney quote "So this is love." Basically, I am living my Disney fantasy dreams with this title... don't mind me. Nonetheless, it is a good title and well fitting.
II. Cover
The cover is very aesthetically pleasing to look at and it doesn't seem crowded with words or the words getting in the way. Though I will say, the bottom part with your name and the type of story is not that visible. The only way I could see it is if I went to your profile and clicked the image to view the "teaser" of the story, but when I go into the story's own section, I can't see the bottom part. I suggest making your name the focal point in the middle of the bottom of the cover (not the total bottom but close to it) and then have the "WLW Romance" either at the top or smaller like "a WLW romance novel by" and then your name. It allows for clarity in viewing the story type and the author. Also, I will say, the title seems like a weird placement. I like the font and the background, just something about that felt off putting.
