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▍❯ Into The Friendly Abyss

Reviewer: frost_1543
Author: @kishasfeelz

Book Title: Into The Friendly Abyss

Cover: 5/5

The cover is so pretty

Title: 5/5

The title is great and unique

Description: 4/5
The description is fine, but I think k it revealed too much of the story. If you can try to make it a bit suspicious so you will attract more readers.

Grammar/Vocabulary: 14/15The grammar and Vocabulary is fine. The story is easily understandable too.

Use of literary techniques: 8/10No problem here.

Character Development: 13/15The character development is fine. I especially liked the part where Dexter tells how he really feels and how much he misses Janet.

Emotions Evoked: 8/10The initial chapters made me feel bad about the things Richard said. Some lines definitely made me laugh. I also felt sad about her relationship with her father, then her sister goes missing. So much is happening in her life.

Writing style: 9/10Your writing style is great. I rarely read books of your type. But this is really good and in-between you add your thoughts, and they are really enjoyable.

Plot+Originality: 14/15The plot is very unique and the author has done a good job coming up with such a different and unique plot. I have never read book with the main character being a little and getting to know more about it was really interesting. I learnt a new thing. You are the only one who can express a very serious issue in a funny way.

General satisfaction: 9/10The book makes you laugh, get angry. The cliffhangers are insane. The plot is unique. Definitely a book you should read if youare looking for something out of the ordinary.

Total marks: 90/100This book is a must read for people who want to explore different and unique plots. I am looking forward to how the book is going to prgress. All the best. I hope your book receives the recognition it deserves. 

- Thank you.