Third Person’s POV
Kritika was sitting in a coffee shop with Aniket….there was an awkward silence between
them…..
ANIKET : uhum… Kriti, I know you are not ready
for this… but can you please give our
relationship a chance….
Kritika looked at Aniket quietly without saying anything…
ANIKET : Kriti, nowadays you immersed yourself in your work so much that you even forgot to eat… everybody is worried about you … they want you to move on… so they have
suggested this idea…
KRITIKA : So you mean to say… this is not your idea… you are forced into this…
ANIKET : no no no… no one has forced me… I… I am your friend … I thought if I can help… so
I volunteer…
KRITIKA : yeah… right… you are my friend… and also like a brother to me...
ANIKET : Hey no no… I am not like a brother to you… ( replied anxiously)
KRITIKA : why? You are Anisha’s brother so of course You are like my brother too.
ANIKET : Your brother is Anisha's husband , not her brother…..she has never thought Karan
as his brother…so you also don’t think me your brother...
Kritika started laughing….. After some time she realized Aniket staring at her with
intense gaze…
KRITIKA : why are you staring at me like that?
ANIKET : I see you smiling like this after many days… Kriti… don’t let this smile get lost just
because some vile people… many people are eager to see you smile…
KRITIKA : and if I am not wrong… you are also one of them…
ANIKET : you know…right?
Kritika smiles slyly…
ANIKET : How did you know ?
KRITIKA : Karan bhai has told me…
ANIKET : Karan?
KRITIKA : Yes… he was not 100% sure … he had some doubts…
ANIKET : Yes…It’s true….I like you very much…so… will you give me chance?
KRITIKA : I don’t know… I had never seen you like that….but Anisha has given me this condition so of course, I will go on dates with you ….I will give you this chance… but I can’t
guarantee you about positive results…
ANIKET : don’t worry… that’s enough for me… I will not miss this chance… I will work
hard… this is the first time I am so proud of my sister's work…
Kritika smiled widely….. She knows she have to move on… so for her friends and family's
happiness she will try…
It’s been two weeks… they ( Aniket and Kritika) are going on dates…..she still doesn’t
see Aniket as her boyfriend… but she enjoys her company…Her family is also
happy seeing her like this… It was like they are again seeing the talkative,
demanding, beautiful old Kritika
On the other side…
Mr. AHUJA : you idiot… you are goods for nothing… You couldn’t even do this simple
thing…(threw a nearby vase on the floor).
Mrs. AHUJA : why are you blaming him…If Kritika didn’t hear your conversation nothing will have happened…
Mr. AHUJA : Do you know what they are planning?
Mrs. AHUJA : what?
Mr. AHUJA : they want Aniket to marry Kritika .
RISHI : WHAT??
Mr. AHUJA : yes… you have heard me correctly….. They have already started going on dates …
RISHI : Noo… this will never happen…She can only marry me… she is mine… I will talk to her…
I know she loves me… she will definitely listen to me…she is mine ( said like a
stubborn child)
Said this he left the room…
Mrs. AHUJA : Rishi… listen…
Mr. AHUJA : Don’t stop him… let him do the last try.
Mrs. Ahuja was worriedly looking at the retreating figure of his son…
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Unconditional Love
RomanceWhen you love someone do you really need any condition? .... This is a story of Unconditional love... A lovely ,sweet ,talkative girl, Kritika...pampered by her family... she never thinks about the consequences before does anything. He has a boyfrie...
