Third Person’s POV
Two weeks have passed…
KARAN : heyy… no no no… this is not right ....you have gotten the chance of designing the room then at least I should have the right to choose the name…
KRITIKA : No no you are very bad at that...
PAYEL : yes… I agree with Kritika…
KARAN : Aree at least first listen then decide….you all will praise me after hearing the
name…
PAYEL : ok fine.. Say
KARAN : so I have decided if it’s a boy then his name will be Kapa… from Payel’s 'Pa' and Kabir’s 'Ka'….. 'KAPA'…
KRITIKA : Kapa?? Hahaha… everyone will make fun of my nephew… Karan, you want us to
praise you for hearing this name… hahahaha…
Kritika was laughing heartedly….. Everyone knew Karan has said that funny name because he wanted to make Kritika laugh….. After such a long time they saw Kritika
laugh….Kritika has started to move on….. She has again started her work….now
she goes on dates with Aniket but in a little different way….. Aniket doesn’t
take Kritika to a cinema hall, coffee shop, parks, or any beautiful places on
their dates… he takes her to the home centre where many survivors live or work….. Yes… survivors….. Survivors of acid attack, rape or even domestic violence….. They spend time with them on their dates….. Their strength, and their
stories have helped Kritika very much…..
Kritika has moved on… she has started behaving normally… but her family still misses the old
Kritika…they know the old Kritika will never come back… Now Kritika is
obedient, well mannered which her family always wanted… and now when she became
like that they don’t like it…..
Kabir didn’t want Kritika to realize that Karan has said this name to make her laugh… so he
said…
KABIR : o god… Karan you are an idiot… I will never let you name my child….I have already
decide a name… if it’s a boy then his name will be Pabir and if it’s a girl then her name will be Koyel.
KARAN : no it’s not good..
KRITIKA : it’s far better than yours… I like it… Pabir… from Payel's Pa and Kabir’s
bir… It’s a little old fashion but nice… not like yours, Karan…
KARAN : huhh mine was far better…
KRITIKA : chii… Anisha… when you have children in the future….. Please don’t let him name
your children…
KARAN : heyy… her children will be also my children … I will have the rights to name
them…
KRITIKA : Yeah…yeah …of course….. ( said sarcastically)
KARAN : huuuhhh….. we will see..
KRITIKA : yeah we will see…
The siblings were enjoying the evening happily…..
Next Day
Today Mehta Mansion has been decorated very beautifully with many balloons…
but only with two colours of balloons… blue and pink..
Today is Payel's baby shower….there will be a small puja (worship God)…..there will be a
small function of puja and every elder will give their blessing to Payel and
her unborn baby…
Kritika, Karan, Anisha and Aniket were very busy from the morning… as they had taken the
responsibility to arrange this baby shower function…..
The function went very well… now they are busy taking credits… who has done well..?
ANISHA : listen the garden’s decorations were better than the hall…
KARAN : ohh please… Aniket and I have done far better decoration than you guys…
ANISHA : Bhabi , you say… it was your special program… you decide… whose decoration was
best… is it ours(pointing at Kritika and
herself) or theirs (pointing at Aniket
and Karan) ?
Mrs. MEHTA : ok guys enough… now Payel needs rest and you guys also should have some rest… you guys have worked very hard… you all must be tired… and you all did a good
job… don’t quarrel like a child…
KRITIKA : yeah…bye… I am feeling very tired… good night… I am goi-
Before Kritika could complete her sentence she faint…
‘Kritika’ ‘Kriti’ ‘Princess’ – everyone shouted almost same time..
Kabir was near Kritika…he caught her before her body could touch the floor…
He picked her up and took her to her room…
Karan has already called the doctor…....
Mr. MEHTA : why did she suddenly faint?
Mrs. MEHTA : I think she must be exhausted…
Mrs. KAPOOR : yeah… it will be the reason….. They have been so busy because of these… that
they didn’t even rest properly….. Payel beta (child) you go take rest… Kritika
is fine…
PAYEL : yeah… I will go….but after I listen from the doctor… I will go..
At this moment the door of Kritika’s room opened and the doctor came out...
KABIR : doctor, how is my sister??
DOCTOR : umm… she is fine…
Mr. MEHTA : why did she suddenly faint?
DOCTOR : She is Pregnant.
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