Re-write this story?

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Okay I gotta admit- looking back I could've written a lot of things better. Like the uncle part is just cringe. I am sorry I know. The ending I don't regret the part where Armelle chose to take a break because she deserves it. The trauma was too much for her to handle. But some of y'all are ruthless. Anyways. Should I re-write the story? I think it could be executed better at least a little. Let me know in thr comments.

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