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✦ { Nir } What if Geto is Your Master

REVIEWER: @nkvenus7878

CLIENT: @mothboyikari

💖 Cover Page: 4/5

The cover page for the book “What if Geto is Your Master” is very appealing and well suited with the story representing the main character and the vibe with precision.

There could've been more improvement, however, it's well either way!

💖 Title: 4/5

“What if Geto is Your Master” is truly a wonderfully chosen title for the story since it clearly captures the picture of all the events occuring in the story and gives an immediate understandable idea of the book to the readers.

However, since the story is a little bit on the darker side, a bit more sinister title would've added to the fire. Nevertheless, the title woks well!

💖 Blurb: 2/5

The blurb of any book, similar to title and cover page holds a great value to catch any reader's attention. It may be short and precise, consisting of all the main events to occur throughout the story.

The blurb for this book seemingly does not give any detail on the storyline in general. A good amount of improvement is indeed required in this area.

💖 Characters: 8.7/10

The character development in the story has been done really well. The description of all the main characters, their internal emotions as well as how their stories play out has been done in a very unique manner.

Nevertheless, the appearance of the characters has been done meagerly. Neither has much clear idea been given about the side characters. A little more depth in these areas would certainly help the readers to connect!

💖 Vocabulary: 5/5

The usage of words has been done quite eloquently with absolutely no errors! Quite an amazing feat!

💖 Grammar: 4.2/5

Grammar of the book “What if Geto is Your Master” is well written with next to perfect phrases, amazing use of tense and little to no errors in most of the area.

However, punctuation errors are indeed a concern with common errors in commas, paragraph divisions, etc. A little editing in this part would certainly be useful.

💖 Enjoyment: 5/5

Ultimately, the main reason as to why readers read any book is for their personal enjoyment. The book has indeed taken care of this part!

From the silly moments, to extremely serious ones, it's truly been well written. Especially the intimate moments are truly well described!

💖 Plot: 8.6/10

The plotting or the manner in which the events occurred as well as the storyline truly leave a reader in awe. The twists and turns as well as the descriptions are absolutely admirable.

But there are indeed certain places for improvement. There isn't any proper distinguishing of several paragraphs due to improper divisions, some details might be vague and the manner in which the story has been presented in the first few chapters, especially in the first chapter, is not very appealing. It's suggested to make the format more appealing for the readers’ readability.

🎉 Total: 41.5/50

🎉 Percent: 83%

🎉 Overall Review:

Overall, in my opinion, the book doesn't really require much of an assessment. Since it's pretty much evident that it has received a good share of votes, comments and reads, it's apparent it's doing pretty well on its own.

There although are always places for improvement as mentioned above, regardless, “What if Geto is Your Master” is truly a wonderfully written work!