Slayers: When Right Becomes Wrong

Not an Update

I'm deleting this chapter once I'm done with it all.

So, I've decided to change the gist of the story. This is going to become a book based God, and how Lisanna finds God after hating Him for her parents death. I'm sorry for any of my followers or readers are unhappy about this change, but it's going to happen regardless.

I am also currently fighting the worst possible writers block, which is making it difficult to change my story, or motivate myself to continue writing.

This said, tomorrow I'm going to try and download what's on Wattpad to my computer, so I can start editing. I have no doubt that once I start, I'll actually get somewhere. I've also started working on my new chapter, where the first real major change is happening. I'm asking a friend of mine to do the cover for me, he's going to be doing his interpretation of Lisanna, in exchange for a computer that I own. I don't want him to do it for free. It feels cheap.

Please comment on this chapter, giving me your thoughts on everything.

This is still going to be something of a teacher student romance, but the focus isn't on it. I'm sorry to all the fans of these types of books, but I'm working on writing a book that might be published one day, and I have to write what I feel is right.

I kinda have an issue here, and I'd like your opinions, if possible. Also on the T/S thing. So, I realise that it is illegal in some countries, but it isn't in mine. It's considered morally wrong, but there are no real problems. At worst the teacher would be asked to resign, or the student asked to move schools. So my problem is this: Nick and Lisa aren't going to get together anytime soon. As you can see, she isn't ready, and doesn't want it. She has a strong feeling of right and wrong, and sets boundaries so she doesn't accidentally overstep her own. Nick is a complex guy, as you haven't learnt yet, but we'll get there eventually. I don't want this to become a cliché, but I'm scared that it might.

My characters won't change immediately, but there will be changes, and you might not like it.

But I haven't gotten to my problem. Morally, right now, this story is wrong to me. There's too much cussing, and it isn't really going anywhere.

I want to know if you want me to go on.

So yeah, there's the question. Do you want me to continue? With the changes? Because I can't leave it as it is, but if you don't want the changes I'll just remove it. Try something different.

So please give me your opinions guys and gals.

Thank you
Muerte