Thank you so much for reading Dave's adventure.
I'd really value any feedback you may have because I very keen to improve the story if I can. So, if you do have any thoughts about the storyline, style or characters, please leave them here in a comment.
Thanks again for giving my writing a chance.
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Dying to Live
AdventureWe all make bad decisions, but bad decisions don't usually cost you your life. Dave Murray is rotting in a Bangkok prison cell, terrified he's going to be sentenced to death and it's all because of a bad decision... and a woman. A few weeks earlier...
