Wow! It was ssoooooooo amazing, I loved it. I love the way you write and I love the little graphics everywhere. Sometimes I forgot this story was a reading request. I love the characters and I love the balance of story. I just love everything XD. Although one note, even though adjectives are great and giving detail is great try not overly describe simply things. You didn't do it all the time and I get why you used your adjectives where you did and it worked nicely just be careful not to go over board because that's when you do the story loses its sense of reality. I know it's stupid but it might help. Other than that it was really interesting. Please update!!! :)
-divergent_lover4646
