Train

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Train passed through a wild land;

Rain poured down the windows and

Rice fields, burned down after fall.

Ice floats in glasses for all.

There she shook, a little colder;

Here he wept while growing older.

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A/N: Changeling a.k.a Metamorphosis poetry is a constraint form created by Olan L. Smith( CottonJones )The form is 6 lines with 6 words in each. The first and the last words in line 1 are changed by removing the first letter to make a new word for the beginning and ending words in line 2 (For example: In my poem Train and land in line 1 becomes Rain and and in line 2). The same process is repeated throughout the poem. Rhyme and meter are optional.

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