If We Meet Again (book review)

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If We Meet Again By: Wolfykikyu

First Upload: January 24, 2012

Last upload: May 15, 2012

Reads- 555

Votes- 15

Comments- 11

18 parts (16 pages)

Pg-13

Spiritual and Watty Awards 2012

Summary:

Rian and Ryan have been best friends since they were born. Living next to each other only made the friendship grow. Now Ryan is dead and Rain can't seem to forget him. She's been trying to lock him out of her brain since the day he died. When, or even if, Ryan can finally contact her will she remember him?

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Gave a love from beyond the grave feeling. For me this was lacking realism, I don’t think anyone would use the word ‘fladoodle’ after they just found out that their best friend suddenly died. I think you should work on your flow and look into getting an editor.  

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