I am going to keep this relatively short. I'm planning on starting to write tonight, the first story WILL NOT be part of the Astolfo dating series, cause I want to get to know the ins and outs of Wattpad before I jump right on in and potentially mess it up. But I still want to at least practice, so by the end of tonight I will have produced a hopefully good random Astolfo date fantasy. Then I NEED you guys (and gals) to help me by telling me 1.) what you think, and 2.) suggestions/ constructive criticism on improvement. I also plan on writing a funny ghost gf series in the future, I am super excited! Can we get a Traps are better in the comments?