As I am writing this arc I realized something. This arc doesn't really focus much on Tian Yi (Yun Heng) and his development. I feel like the focus for this arc kind of diverted a little bit to being about Tian Wu.
I don't exactly hate that, but because of that I think I will be bringing this arc to close soon. What do you think about the direction this is going in?
I'm not completely satisfied with what I have planned for the characters but we shall see what happens.
I already have an idea for the next arc so maybe that's why I'm not totally impressed with this one.
Let me know your thoughts. Do you think this arc is going well? Let me know if you like it. If you think it's meh then let me know too!
I'm working on my writing skills and there are places where I may have left plot holes. If you see something that seems wrong please point it out! I love getting feedback!
Also for the spelling/grammar nazis don't worry I'm one too. I'm guilty of not always re-checking my work before posting it. I get too excited to publish parts sometimes so I'm sorry (Ｔ▽Ｔ)
Love as always!
TS Mahima
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Change the Fate of the Cannon Fodder
RomanceYun Heng lacks emotions and dies at the hand of a desperate wannabe lover. Bound to a system he traverses from world to world saving the Cannon Fodder in hopes that these missions will help him find a way to learn how to feel emotions. However he ne...
