a delicious dish is made up of fresh ingredients and a well-thought-out recipe, right?
welcome to 'recipe'! wherein chef mae carefully analyzes the recipe of your preferred dish to help you make it more delectable and pleasant to eat!
in other words...
-the title is actually not that bad! i see why you chose it after reading a few chapters from your story and i like it!
cover! (5/5)
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-i love how simple yet pretty your cover is! i honestly love it omg
description!(8/10)
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-i think you wrote a pretty good description! however, i think that there's something wrong in the second paragraph. i suggest something like 'a new female transfer student came and made people have an interest in her, specifically taehyung.', but it's only a suggestion.
-same with the third paragraph, maybe it'll sound better if it's 'but what if someone else has caught her attention?' be consistent with verb tenses.
