05. the thingummy by noorie!

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FIRST IMPRESSIONS!

title! (5/5)

-it's odd yet it fits your story unexpectedly very well!

cover! (5/5)

-ohmygod that cover is beautifully and skillfully made! the font is such a good choice omg i like your cover a lot!

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-ohmygod that cover is beautifully and skillfully made! the font is such a good choice omg i like your cover a lot!

description! (10/10)

-10/10 yes i stan it's interesting and the final dialogues make the readers nervous yet curious at the same time

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-10/10 yes i stan it's interesting and the final dialogues make the readers nervous yet curious at the same time.

WRITING STYLE!

grammar! (16/20)

-your writing style is more on the descriptive yet addicting side! most of the time, if the author describes everything 'too much', i get bored and my eyes just scan through the clump of words but that isn't the case for your style.

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