01. monte carlo by zariya!

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FIRST IMPRESSIONS!

title! (4/5)

-it sounds fitting but i don't know, i feel like it could be more creative? but it's good though!

cover! (2/5)

-if i'm not mistaken, that's moonbyul, right? welp the cover looks pretty and she does too but it isn't related to your story at all?

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-if i'm not mistaken, that's moonbyul, right? welp the cover looks pretty and she does too but it isn't related to your story at all?

description! (8/10)

-😌😌 i love your description so much omg

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-😌😌 i love your description so much omg

-sadly, there are some grammatical mistakes that i've noticed.

-i believe that omitting the commas before and after the phrase 'even the wedding clamor' is a good choice since it doesn't seem necessary.

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