03. high fidelity by kay!

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FIRST IMPRESSIONS!

title! (3/5)

-there's only two options, it's either i'm dumb or we're not too deep into the story yet aaashjsak i don't really get why 'high fidelity' is the title of your book but it sounds sorta fitting!

cover! (5/5)

-ooooh it looks very pretty!

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-ooooh it looks very pretty!

description! (10/10)

-this is honestly such an interesting description? it'll for sure spark curiosity in the readers' minds which will make them click your book

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-this is honestly such an interesting description? it'll for sure spark curiosity in the readers' minds which will make them click your book. what you've written also has what i think are the 'necessities' of a good description, an engrossing yet brief piece about/from the book and a dialogue.

WRITING STYLE!

grammar! (18/20)

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