Meet The Matthews triplets:
short-tempered Arielle, Belle the beauty and Snow White the pink-haired tomboy. Despite their straight-out-of-fairytale names their life is far from one.
Their chirpy stepmother decided to move across the ocean and send t...
Firstly, thanks so much for picking up this book - I've been here for a while, but it looks like I still don't quite know how to attract people to my stories ;)
Secondly, I'd politely like to ask you to see 2 things which are very important to me atm 😊
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1. PATIENCE
I know it sounds a bit weird, but please just note that every character will be introduced in their own time, (here I mean their name too).
Just because you immediately don't get his/her whole physical description and backstory doesn't mean it won't come up later when its more fitting for the story.
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2. LENGTH & GRAMMAR
Chapter 1 is long. Like, super long. Some people have a problem with that because it takes them a lot of time to read it ( depends if you're a fast/slow reader).
I want to point out that it's only the 1st chapter that's so long, and the reason is because it's here to create a look into the triplets' lives before leaving for Liverpool, which is extremely crucial for the story, character growth, comparisment etc.
As for grammar - I'm aware of the occasional shifting of tenses & usage of ' ' instead of standard " " in dialogue, but please notice I'm editing it all which takes time and concentration 😊
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Thanks for stopping by, hope you like what comes next!
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