Omg, I'm really angry, wattpad deleted three quarters of my review and I had to redo everything, so I'm really sorry 💜😔
Title: 5/5
Cover: 5/5
Description: 5/5
Story flow: 18/20
Plot: 20/20
Grammar: 9/10
Spelling: 10/10
Aesthetics: 6/10
Original: 10/10
Writing Format: 5/5
Total: 93/100
Comments:
I really loved how the title fitted the story line 😂
And the cover really gave off a artsy vibe!
The story flow was quite okay, there wasn't much confusion, but maybe it could have been at different paces for each chapters?
There were some minor grammar errors, spelling was okay.
Aesthetics is pretty plain, there's no aesthetics at all, maybe you can add come character aesthetic, but that should have been done at the start of the story, or each chapter, pictures could have been added for more spice
I'm sorry if the review is really plain, I'm just really upset at wattpad for deleting my review and like I can't remember much anymore and I don't want to have to reread everything 💜
STAI LEGGENDO
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