The Fallen Widow

Author's Note: Story So Far

Readers feedback. 

I want to thank all those readers who are reading this story live and commenting. This helps a writer a hell of a lot and gives them motivation to update fast even if life is pretty crazy. 

I respect my reader, I value their feedback I value, hence why I am still on Wattpad. Readers engagement is one of the best.

So, I want to throw the questions out there to you. Silent readers, voters, and vocal readers, please answer one or all the questions.

This is my first draft. The story is plotted and planned. You feedback can help me improve.

I welcome critical feedback. I'll give you an example:

Non critical feedback; 'He's stupid. She's dumb. I hate him.'

Critical feedback: 'I don't like her, she doesn't feel real and what she says doesn't match what she does.'

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1 Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? If not, why not?

#2 Did you get oriented fairly quickly at the beginning as to whose story it is, and where and when it's taking place? If not, why not?

#3 Could you relate to the main character?

#4 Did the setting interest you and did the descriptions seem vivid and real to you?

#5 Was there a point at which you felt the story lagged or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly?

#6 Were there any parts that confused you? Or even frustrated or annoyed you? Which parts, and why?

#7 Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in time sequences, places, character details, or other details?

#8 Were the characters believable? Are there any characters you think could be made more interesting or more likable?

#9 Did you get confused about who's who in the characters? Were there too many characters to keep track of? Too few? Are any of the names of characters too similar?

#10 Did the dialogue keep your interest and sound natural to you? If not, whose dialogue did you think sounded artificial or not like that person would speak?

#11 Did you feel there was too much description or exposition? Not enough? Maybe too much dialogue in parts?

#12 Is there enough conflict, tension, and intrigue so far to keep your interest?

#14; What would you like to happen next or later with any of the characters? 

#15. How often would you like an update? Short or long?  (Please don't say every day lol)