Lookingforfeedback Stories

Separated when it happened. A family try's to reunite and get to a place we're that can ride out the upcoming storm the apocalypse will inevitably bring. Dive-in and bec...

Scarred from past experiences, Scarlet does her best to protect her shattered family. From police to friends, no one can be trusted. As her past tried to recapture her...

Idea for a new fantasy race, looking for feedback, will add more in the future.

A thirteen years old boy, who's been through hell, is about to have an even worse year than he can ever imagine. With the fate of his life, and many others in his hands...

Aelynn, Commander of the 4th Legion is ordered to sail south to Sienan in order to secure an alliance but only under the condition that she takes out a vampire plaguing...

This is a work in progress that may become the prologue to a longer story if I can figure out where to go with it. So for this one I'm looking for feedback, suggestions...