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Jane Bennett Carroway has had to live with being named for the pretty Bennett sister in the famous Austen work her whole life.
When her beautiful best friend Camilla wins a contest to have lunch with teen heartthrob Charles McAllister, she recruits Jane to be her unwilling plus-one. Jane tags along because she's loyal to Camilla - and secretly loves Charles a bit, too.
At lunch, Charlie is taken with Jane. Unlike every other girl he meets, she doesn't order salad. She doesn't kiss his ass. And perhaps most importantly - she orders dessert.
Join Jane and Charlie on their [top-secret] journey of self-discovery and self-acceptance - and a love that might change their lives forever.
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"Hello, ladies," he said, smiling. "I'm Charles Michael McAllister."
"I'm Jane," Jane said, holding out her hand. Charles took it, but didn't let go when she expected him to, and she nearly fell onto the table.
"I gave my full name, I believe it's only polite to reciprocate in kind?" he said with a little smirk.
Jane huffed out a breath. "Jane Bennett Carroway," she said.
He looked at Jane in surprise. "I'm sorry, but did you say 'Jane Bennett'?"
"Yes, that's my name," she replied, as if it were completely normal.
Charles flashed Jane a grin. "You must have very interesting parents," he remarked.
He challenged her again later.
"I guess you liked your food," he said, looking pointedly at her empty plate.
"I guess you did, too, Charlie," Jane responded evenly, gesturing to his equally clean plate. "In fact, I want dessert." And she gave Charles an openly challenging look.
Charles knew that the beautiful Camilla was the girl who'd won the contest, the girl he was supposed to be talking to.
But he found his gaze drawn again and again to the tall, thin girl, with the wispy blonde hair, huge appetite, and beautiful eyes, eyes that held a glimmer of attitude. He couldn't even remember the last time anyone had talked back to him.
Interesting.
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I watch a dazed Katherine. She whispered to herself.
"Is this the part where I get kidnapped?"
Is that what she thinks I'm here for?
I don't want to kidnap her, just take her to dinner. I don't want Katherine thinking this.
"Katherine I'm not here to kidnap you."
She looks shocked by what I said.
Katherine asked in a low voice.
"If he's not, then what is he here for?"
She's talking out loud to herself he concluded after that. Katherine wasn't paying attention to him.
"To ask you out to dinner." Nicholas answers trying to get her attention so she realizes his intentions.
"Katherine have dinner with me."
"No, I can't" Katherine say after.
He saw a look of confusion on her face.
I'm being very clear. I don't see what she's confused about.
"How do you know my name?" He hears her answering his own question.
Why is she asking me this?
I'm her best friend, of course I know her name.
Nicholas didn't understand the previous question.
"Because we've met before."
The look that comes over Katherine's face is bewilderment. She doesn't get anything I'm saying.
Its almost like I'm talking to a stranger.
The thought shook Nicholas to his core because he's telling the truth. Katherine didn't believe him. He knew he's right after what she says next.
"We've never met before aside from you stalking me," she tells him.
Nicholas felt his entire world shatter around them. Katherine sounds like she doesn't know me. She sounds like someone who never met her bestfriend. She sounds like, a stranger...
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