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Après le concours, le book de critiques ! 

Donc dans ce book, je vous donnerai mon avis sur vos histoires Wattpad.  Que vous ayez 1 vue ou 1 million, je pense qu'on a toujours besoin d'avis. Après, ne vous attendez pas à un avis qui va vous brosser dans le sens du poils. Clairement pas. Je suis là pour soulever les erreurs, les incohérences et les maladresses. Bien sûr, il y aura du positif. Simplement, il n'y aura pas QUE ça. 

Je suis un tigre, pas un chaton....
PS : Je serais en pause du 6 avril au 15 Juillet en raison du concours que j'organise !All Rights Reserved

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Terrible Writing Advice // Wattpad Anime "critique" by Pita_the_Bread

Here you'll learn how to become a master of the art of writing fanfiction. These tutorials are 100% approved by the Herd mentality that poisons this platform. Rest assured! I guarantee you'll become one of the most esteemed writers around here, with ideas never seen before...well... except the other few hundreds that do the same stuff. BOTTOM LINE! Follow this guide and you too can become the most bland and unoriginal guy on Wattpad. You're welcome! Disclaimer:SARCASM in pula mea! Do not take this seriously! And yes, I'm making a parody after a channel of the same name on YouTube.

Thoughts by raymac_eric

*** A Wattpad Featured Collection *** Dreams. Imagination. Emotions. These are what this book emodies. The stories here will be centered on these three pillars. Pillars that can open up the world we live in to something better than what we know. And nothing can define the world better than the Thoughts we have everyday. Here's a couple of mine :) ............................................................................................................................... This book is a collection of short stories written to inspire, facilitate, and maybe even motivate, anyone out there with something to say about life. A story is a gift best shared than received. Amazing cover was done by @KRosalle. She's truly an amazing person🙌 (The Creativity Awards Runner's Up ✌😊) (The S.S.P.R 3rd place Random Winner✌😊) (The Rose Awards 1st place Short Story Winner✌😊) (The Pen and Ink January Quote Awards 2nd Place Winer✌😊) (Featured in Wattpad Short Stories Reading List "Boxed Sets" ✌️😊) *I'm climbing the ladder here haha*

𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐓 𝐈𝐍 𝐓𝐈𝐌𝐄 | 𝗥𝗘𝗩𝗘𝗥𝗦𝗘 𝟭𝟵𝟵𝟵 - 𝑴𝑨𝑳𝑬 𝑹𝑬𝑨𝑫𝑬𝑹 by Spongy449

[MALE READER IN REVERSE 1999] - 𝗦𝗟𝗢𝗪 𝗕𝗨𝗥𝗡 FANFIC "𝙏𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙞𝙨 𝙣𝙤 𝙥𝙖𝙨𝙩, 𝙣𝙤 𝙛𝙪𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙞𝙨 𝙤𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙣𝙤𝙬" ---------------------✸✸✸✸✸✸✸✸✸✸-------------------- It can be challenging to get used to the behaviour of the people in this era but it's important to remember that they are just trying to survive in their own unique way. You never know what they're going through, and a little kindness goes a long way. Time travelling can be quite an experience. It is fascinating to see how things were in the past. For instance, it may be difficult to understand why people behave in certain ways or communicate with different accents, like Ring. Therefore, keep an open mind and embrace the possibility of learning something new. With the right attitude and determination, one can navigate through these challenges and make the most out of this time travelling adventure. There are always those who do not seem to understand the gravity of the situation. Y/N may be an arcanist, or perhaps something else entirely. However, his disregard for the seriousness of time travel can have devastating consequences, and it is impossible to protect the timeline from his reckless behavior. Every decision he makes is like the butterfly's effect where a single flap can cause the 𝗧𝗲𝗺𝗽𝗲𝘀𝘁 on the other side of the world. So beware, for Y/N may be your saving grace... or the undoing of this universe as you know it. A massive 'What-if', when certain figures associated with 'The Storm' met the Timekeeper? [CONTENT WARNING: This story contains content such 𝗠𝘂𝗿𝗱𝗲𝗿, 𝗚𝗼𝗿𝗲, 𝗩𝗶𝗼𝗹𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲, 𝗦𝘁𝗿𝗼𝗻𝗴 𝗟𝗮𝗻𝗴𝘂𝗮𝗴𝗲, and 𝗦𝘂𝗶𝗰𝗶𝗱𝗲 which may inappropriate for some readers. Reader discretion is advised.] [ WORD COUNT - 800,000+ WORDS ]

🎀 𝑭𝑶𝑹𝑬𝑽𝑬𝑹 𝑭𝑹𝑰𝑬𝑵𝑫𝑺 💖 - ✌️For The Ages, Till The Very End 👍 by RoseStar714

🖐️ Hi ! 🎀 Rose 💖 is here 😄 Get ready for awesome adventure and amazing journeys 😉 As the book already said that 🎀 𝑭𝑶𝑹𝑬𝑽𝑬𝑹 𝑭𝑹𝑰𝑬𝑵𝑫𝑺 💖 -✌️For The Ages, Till The Very End 👍 [COMPLETED ✅ ✍️] (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧ 'Let's Get Lost Into The Stars'. 'Let's Do A Lot Of Fun'. 'Amazing Adventures Story'. 'Read Till The Very End'. Eight good friends one day met up with each other by an awkward coincidence. An unknown and unnatural situation blocked them to return back where they were supposed to go 🤔 A mysterious white aura light guided them to a time portal. The eight teenage girls entered into the portal to discover new things and they went to many dimensions but can't find how they'll return back to their own world 😐 But they don't know what will waiting for all of them. They're going to face some awesome and dangerous things. They will do some amazing journeys in the fantasy world and go through the time and dimensions. Will they still ALIVE?! What Will HAPPEN! 😧 Wait You Can See That! 😇 Some Mind-blowing Adventures you can see in thus story 🤫 But wait till the story begins ✋ I'm new on Wattpad inspired by my one friend's story (My Random Things Book By @Mariennetqueen) I found an idea of starting an Adventures Story of Teenage Girls 💗 Please support me. Vote ⭐ if you like 😋 and Comment 💬 on the story. With your support, through your words and comments I can know how I'm doing and I'll try to do more better 💓 I can learn some wonderful ideas so support! And please don't use wrong words in the story, through your comments 🙏 If you don't like, don't read this. You're feel free to correct my mistakes. Say in the comments what you want, I'll try my best to do it ✌️ I only have the ideas & the OCs here. Really thanks to my all Wattpad Friends for helping me with the story 💕 🤗 HOPE YOU'LL ENJOY!! (◔‿◔)(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。

Evan (CC) Afton X Fem. Y/n by Its_Me_Micheal

Posts will be slow due to lack of motivation and that I've been more focused on school lately- because I'm actually trying to do well this year :> sorry for all the hold up but motivation is not here my friends! To new readers, Evan is 18 in this story yes there is smut, don't like it don't read it? On that note, I have a DEAL for you thirsty readers asking for smut. If there's no smut chapter posted then I have a /oneshot in this as well BUT only if it meets requirements The DEAL is, reach a number of stars/votes/⭐ and I'll post a smut special. (will not be posted the exact time goal is reached for writer reasons) Current goals; 350⭐ Boss x Employee AU (working on) 400⭐ Alive/Rich AU (working on) 450⭐ Lab AU (working on) 500⭐ Royal AU 550⭐ Stripper AU 20K👁️ My Flavor (HEAVY trigger warnings) (working on) (Will get updated when needed)

Perfect Fate ✔ (Moved To Inkitt) by fanoshkaflippo

Wattpad Creator! Happy and proud. HIM: Staying the night? Not my thing. Hearts and flowers? Boring. Falling in love? Not anytime soon. Settling down? Off the table. Getting married? You're kidding me, right? That was me before the night we first met. Because, well, meeting a hot chick that made me hard just by looking at her was definitely not in my plans when I sneaked out of a woman's apartment after what was already a long night. Taking her home and getting her a chocolate cake, though, was kind of intentional. But falling for her? Boy, that was pretty much inevitable. HER: He came out of nowhere, literally. I was there, sitting on that bench, barefoot and crying and just getting my heart broken in peace and silence. Then he appeared, all mad and furious and sexy and tall and just drool-worthy! And just like that, despite my poor attempts of escaping him, he had me wrapped in his world. A crazy yet heart-fluttering world, that I have absolutely no intentions of leaving anytime soon. ------- Character development is a main theme in this book. It shows you how they both work on changing for the better, while trying to overcome the obstacles in their relationship and fight for each other till the end. ** Warning!! Some chapters contain sexual scenes, but there's always a warning at the head of the chapter. Do not read them if you're under 18.** * Also, please beware that this story contains a lot of swearing. Read at your own risk. * **I don't own any photos used in this book. All are found on the internet for public use.** Highest Rankings: Sexy - #1 Love - #1 General Fiction - #41 Romance - #46 ------ ** Copyright © 2014 by Fanoshka Flippo (Farah Fekry). All rights reserved. No part of this document may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without prior written permission of Fanoshka Flippo / Farah Fekry. **

Another Yinyang Story yay by hopoffthatgaintac

Yinyang got into an accident while auguring. This caused them to get hurt, leading them to the only one who could or would help them. They went to Testtube for help But Testtube found out something that interest her, that would cause them great pain, or cause others they know pain TW- GORE, VOMIT, DEATH, SH, AND MUCH MORE GRUESOME TOPICS ____________________________________________________________________________ Ok so this is my first fanfic and it's about Yinyang so >:3 Don't own any of these characters so ya

"My Little Monster~"|| Selever X Reader [DISCONTINUED] by lazyazz_bijj

Hello! This is my first book so there will probably be some Errors but i'll try my best to fix it. Also English is not my native language so pardon my bad grammar😅😅😅 . Anyway here are some keywords: (Y/N) = Your Name (L/N) = Last Name (H/C) = Hair Colour (H/L) = Hair Length (F/C) = Favourite Colour (S/F/C) = Second Favourite Colour (F/F) = Favorite Food (F/D) = Favourite Drink (F/S) =Favourite Sweet (B/N) = Brother's Name (M/N) = Mother's Name (F/N) = Father's Name __________________________________________________________________________________ You're on college btw and (Y/N) is female. here's a peek at my book. _________________________________________It was a sunday morning and you were making lunch for you and you're roommates. Suddenly you got a call from the headmaster saying that you and your roommates would be having a new roommate and that they would be arriving after lunch. ~Time Skip~ You were playing video games on the couch when you heard a knock on the door. You were confused on why there were knocking on the door because it was Sunday and most of the students were out doing god knows what. Then you suddenly remembered that the headmaster told you that you were having a new roommate today. You opened the door and you see a cute half human half demon boy. "Oh! You must be our new roommate. Nice to meet you, My name's (Y/N) (L/N)." You introduced yourself. "Sup cutie. The names Selever nice to meet you." ............... That's all folks! If you want more of this story, I suggest you read this book. Edit: Just a fair warning. Some chapters may have been jumbled Because of an error so please check the chapters before you read them please.

Shawn Mendes Imagines [COMPLETED] by Sky_Power747

The title describes it all. Requests (except for dirty ones) are welcome. Have fun reading! // Le titre dit tout. Les demandes (à l'exception de avec un esprit tordu) sont les bienvenus. Bon lecture! *All imagines will only be in English // Les pensées sont seulement en Anglais **Updates are every (I don't know) days // Les mises à jour sont tous les (Je ne sais pas) jours ***This book contains more sad imagines than happy ones. I recommend you have a box of tissues ready, but you're always more than welcome to cry along :) // Ce livre contient imagine plus tristes que les heureux. Avoir une boîte de mouchoirs prêts.

Finger Paintings (REBOOT) by FentonGizmo

After MePhone4 mysteriously dissapeared, the remaining contestants were sent back to Hotel OJ. People picked up new interests, Fan became a famous internet blogger, Suitcase and Balloon became detectives, Test Tube continued her science experiments, ect ect... But what about Paintbrush? That *is* who this story is about, is it not? Yes yes, of course. How would we forget our beloved Paintbrush, famous across all of the seasons of II. What happened to them? Well, they started an art class, every wednesday they would help their students get better at painting. But soon enough, they found a new interest. Finger Painting. They loved how much control they had, they loved how easy it was to glide their finger against the canvas. One day, they accidentally spilt some blood onto their canvas. They tried to rub it away, but.. It felt good. Even better than paint. They loved the feeling of the blood against the canvas, rubbing into it and creating an amazing picture. How could they not like it? But they couldn't use it again, they could use a substitute. And so they would. ~~~~~ ah yes, im better at writing now how did that happen? idk lmao since im better at writing i thought, why not rewrite my most popular book? its not like its ahha its not like ive got 3 other things to do so yeah finger paintings reboot was born also the death orders might be a little different giggles Also i will not be making a reboot of revival (unless its highly requested). The ending to this is going to be very different, and will not need a second story. Thank you :) ~~~~~ THIS IS A REBOOT OF THE FINGER PAINTINGS STORY ON MY ACCOUNT, THIS STORY WILL CONTAIN THE FOLLOWING IMAGERY BLOOD SCREAMING DEATH POISONING SUICIDAL THOUGHTS VOMITING SELF HARM ALCOHOL USAGE SEX JOKES (like a lot of them) AND MUCH MORE. IF THESE TOPICS BOTHER YOU IN ANY WAY, PLEASE DO NOT READ. THANK YOU. ~~~~~ CHARACTERS DO NOT BELONG TO ME, THEY BELONG TO ANIMATIONEPIC ON YOUTUBE.

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Terrible Writing Advice // Wattpad Anime "critique"

Here you'll learn how to become a master of the art of writing fanfiction. These tutorials are 100% approved by the Herd mentality that poisons this platform. Rest assured! I guarantee you'll become one of the most esteemed writers around here, with ideas never seen before...well... except the other few hundreds that do the same stuff. BOTTOM LINE! Follow this guide and you too can become the most bland and unoriginal guy on Wattpad. You're welcome! Disclaimer:SARCASM in pula mea! Do not take this seriously! And yes, I'm making a parody after a channel of the same name on YouTube.