If anyone is interested, I'm looking for a group to read this book-club style (one person reading each narrator, with breaks to criticise the story and point out any mistakes I've missed, banter, diversions etc) on a video chat for youtube.
Now on hiatus. I moved the story here from another site; and got no feedback at all. After a hundred chapters that becomes soul destroying. If people are interested, I'd love to finish it, but I can't keep doing this when my other pen name is getting a dozen votes per chapter easily and this doesn't even get read. So if you read it and liked it, please comment. Let others know. Let me know I'm not shouting into the void.
A Rashomon-style story with student pranks, classroom drama, fake CIA agents, Interpol, secret Russian soldiers, biker rabbits, aliens, the mafia, a clockwork zombie, and a whole lot of lies.
Dwayne, Monty, Ferrari, Marco, and Kris were LUSARS: The Lanchester University Samurai Appreciation and Reenactment Society. They were close friends in college, despite very different backgrounds. But they never really talked about what happened when they were appointed custodians of the Box, and none of them know the whole story. It's only at a reunion fifteen years later, when they start sharing their own memories from that week, that the truth might start to emerge.
If you've been following this story on #SaturdayScenes over on Google Plus, you'll notice that the Wattpad version is almost a year behind in the story. But this is the second revision, with a lot of the action tightened up and some earlier scenes changed for continuity. So it might be worth reading these even if you've read the earlier revision.
As I'm posting twice per week here, and I'm breaking the story up into larger chapters, it shouldn't take too long to catch up with what you've seen on the other site. I'm currently expecting to have the Box open in time for Halloween.
He didn't know who I was until they caught me, stealing. They grabbed me, told me I couldn't talk. Then, they dragged me all the way to some sort of jail cell and threw me in it, then they slammed the door and punched in a code that activated a lock. I waited what felt like years till he arrived with a doctor and a guy that looked like an elf. I sat their in the cell, on a bench that was connected to the wall. I stared at the floor until the doctor cleared his throat. I looked up at the doctor. My left eye was swollen and purple. I can't remember anything, all I remember was, I was in this building next to a crystal, passed out, and these men were grabbing me, and they put me In this cell. I couldn't hear what the doctor was saying, my vision was going black, but before I passed out, I saw him standing there. He looked older than me, he had brown hair, and his eyes were so blue! He looked familiar to me. Then it hit me, his name was Kirk, or was it Jim? But all I could get out of my mouth before I passed out was, "help".
⭐️ BOOK 1 OF 2 ⭐️
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(This is a mix with Star Trek into Darkness, and Star Trek Beyond. Some of the parts are from one of those movies, some are made up by me.)
(Some parts from those movies are skipped in this book. Also, this book has "into darkness" in the future if Khan was to escape and bring havoc again. If that makes any sense ?)
[this is also my first wattpad story to be published, so it may be a bit bad but it gets better farther into the book]
*this book also contains some "language" (curse words) in it, just and FYI*
$ I hope you guys like it $
P.S. at the beginning the chapters are some-what short, but as you read further the chapters get longer.(just letting you know, also if you guys find any spelling errors in the story, I tried to find all of them and fix them so I'm sorry if there are any spelling mistakes ?,sorry for all this information??)
⭐️ Im working on book 2