Mr Hook's Big Black Box
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  • Reads 882
  • Votes 78
  • Parts 113
  • Time 11h 47m
Ongoing, First published Sep 15, 2018
If anyone is interested, I'm looking for a group to read this book-club style (one person reading each narrator, with breaks to criticise the story and point out any mistakes I've missed, banter, diversions etc) on a video chat for youtube.

Now on hiatus. I moved the story here from another site; and got no feedback at all. After a hundred chapters that becomes soul destroying. If people are interested, I'd love to finish it, but I can't keep doing this when my other pen name is getting a dozen votes per chapter easily and this doesn't even get read. So if you read it and liked it, please comment. Let others know. Let me know I'm not shouting into the void.

A Rashomon-style story with student pranks, classroom drama, fake CIA agents, Interpol, secret Russian soldiers, biker rabbits, aliens, the mafia, a clockwork zombie, and a whole lot of lies.

Dwayne, Monty, Ferrari, Marco, and Kris were LUSARS: The Lanchester University Samurai Appreciation and Reenactment Society. They were close friends in college, despite very different backgrounds. But they never really talked about what happened when they were appointed custodians of the Box, and none of them know the whole story. It's only at a reunion fifteen years later, when they start sharing their own memories from that week, that the truth might start to emerge.

If you've been following this story on #SaturdayScenes over on Google Plus, you'll notice that the Wattpad version is almost a year behind in the story. But this is the second revision, with a lot of the action tightened up and some earlier scenes changed for continuity. So it might be worth reading these even if you've read the earlier revision.
As I'm posting twice per week here, and I'm breaking the story up into larger chapters, it shouldn't take too long to catch up with what you've seen on the other site. I'm currently expecting to have the Box open in time for Halloween.
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