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Reads 3,285
Votes 155
Parts 15
Time 2h 11m

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This is a gentle but honest shop for writers who want thoughtful feedback. I read up to 8,000 words and offer real reactions, emotional insights, and supportive guidance to help you grow. I'm not here to tear anyone down, but just to help your story shine a little brighter. All genres are welcome.All Rights Reserved

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Tuesday Morning by KKIIAADD

(Ongoing) Book One: Tuesday Morning-Lola and Jamie. Written by K.I.A.D Mature🔞 -Prologue- Jamie's-POV Time doesn't move forward for me. It loops-violent, endless. And always, she's at the centre. Her name is Lola. Or it will be this time. In one life, she was a queen who slit her own throat to escape me. In another, she never lived past the cradle, but I find her. I always find her. And I fall-again and again. I remember every version of her. She remembers none of me. They call me obsessed. Dangerous. They're right. Because I've watched gods rip her from my arms too many times. I've bled kingdoms dry to keep her breathing. I've set entire realms on fire just to feel her pulse beneath my hands. This isn't love. It's a curse-I won't break. If I must chain her soul to mine and burn heaven itself- So be it. This time, she won't leave me. --- LOLA'S-POV Something inside me is... wrong. I don't remember what I'm running from, only that I've always been running. My dreams are riddled with fire and a voice that speaks my name like a vow-and a threat. Then I see him. Jamie. He looks at me like he's starved for centuries. Like I'm the only thing that's ever mattered. And when he touches me, it doesn't feel new. It feels remembered. But it terrifies me. Because when I look at him, I don't see a stranger. I see my ending. And something deeper-darker-whispers: 'This isn't the beginning of our story. It's the repeat of something ancient. Twisted. And fatal.' Author's Note: Thank you for choosing to read my book. Your time and support mean more than you know. This is a fantasy-not a love story-so expect twists, power plays, and deeper truths rather than fairytale romance. I hope it pulls you in. I'd love to hear your thoughts-feel free to share your feedback in the comments!

Behind the scowl by Vintagevellum

Kate Beckett is a force to be reckoned with, and not in a charming way. Meeting her on a lovely evening near the river would be a jarring contrast. She has a prickly demeanor and often comes off as rude to every person she interacts with. In contrast, Arthur Grey is the laid back guy who always means well. He is someone you'd gladly take on a coffee date, even if you had to foot the bill. He's caring, flirty, funny and undeniably attractive. . . . . He finds her interesting and on the contrary she finds him annoying. Soon, his undivided attention towards her started making her heart flutter, perhaps sparking a......crush in her?

මල් හීන|Ongoing by Yuween_Nimnad

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Chat, Engage & Grow by fictionsforu

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THE PISTOL by DewKvidya

•The lost Russo• Luca by Grogudindjarin

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BENEATH THE VEIL by kalaam_aur_khayal

They say some souls are carved from stardust, destined to brush against each other even in the vastness of time. She was poetry wrapped in sunshine-Arushi Sharma, the girl with temple bells in her heart and wildflowers in her smile. Her world was woven with whispered prayers, late-night dreams, and mornings that smelled like incense and hope. She moved like a melody-soft, unpredictable, and unforgettable. And then there was him-Adiraj Chauhan. Stoic. Sharp. Shadowed by his own silence. A man of rules, cloaked in power, walking hallways of echoing commands and untouched emotions. To the world, he was unreachable-a prince with a fortress for a heart. But fate doesn't ask for permission. It just happens. In a moment stitched by the universe, their worlds collided-not with fireworks, but with something deeper... a stillness. Like the eye of a storm. Like time holding its breath. She was the chaos he never allowed. He was the calm she never asked for. And somewhere, between temple chants and ticking clocks, something began. This isn't a love story. It's a cosmic pull. A tale of veils and vows, glances and silences... ...of a girl too soft for the world and a man too hardened by it. Their story begins not with a kiss, but a collision. Of eyes. Of fates. Of unspoken things.

The Card Awards by Vivala_Vidaloca

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Bound by Fates (A/B/O PJO AU) by BlueDreams1998

Spencer Griffiths is a rather shy and reserved daughter of Athena. What happens when she realizes her alignment as an Omega ,not wanting to be 'tied down by a bond with gods know which Alpha ' , only to realize that hers is one of the more popular, outgoing boys , Louis Dupont,a son of Apollo? How will they navigate the bond and the challenges between the two worlds they live in? Will their families find out the truth about their relationship?

Of Love Tales and Rabbit Tails by SilviaKrpatova

After six years in a progressive French boarding school, eighteen-year-old Lady Alice returns to her family's estate in Surrey, dreading the fate that awaits her-- debutante balls, an arranged marriage, and a life she does not want. She would have preferred to stay in France, teaching and writing love tales rather than living one dictated by others. Once cast aside by her own father and a stepmother, Alice finds their sudden desire for reconciliation hollow. Only her childhood best friend, Michael, Marquess Lovelace, seems like a true comfort. But as she settles back into her former home, something strange begins to happen. A black rabbit, eerily familiar, appears in the shadows-- just like the one that belonged to Edmond, her long-forgotten imaginary friend. And then she meets Count D'Arcy, the enigmatic and elusive neighbour whose presence unsettles her. His eyes, his voice, his very being remind her of Edmond. Could it be him? Or is her mind playing tricks on her? As the social season unfolds, Alice finds herself tangled in a web of mystery, romance, and the supernatural. The past and present blur, forcing her to question what is real, what is illusion, and whether love can exist beyond the bounds of reason. In the haunting halls of her childhood home and under the watchful gaze of Count D'Arcy, Alice must uncover the truth before she loses herself to the unknown. ~~~ My entry for the ONC 2025 based on the prompt 105: Your childhood imaginary friend, who disappeared years ago, suddenly returns - only this time, they're real.

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Tuesday Morning cover

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Tuesday Morning

(Ongoing) Book One: Tuesday Morning-Lola and Jamie. Written by K.I.A.D Mature🔞 -Prologue- Jamie's-POV Time doesn't move forward for me. It loops-violent, endless. And always, she's at the centre. Her name is Lola. Or it will be this time. In one life, she was a queen who slit her own throat to escape me. In another, she never lived past the cradle, but I find her. I always find her. And I fall-again and again. I remember every version of her. She remembers none of me. They call me obsessed. Dangerous. They're right. Because I've watched gods rip her from my arms too many times. I've bled kingdoms dry to keep her breathing. I've set entire realms on fire just to feel her pulse beneath my hands. This isn't love. It's a curse-I won't break. If I must chain her soul to mine and burn heaven itself- So be it. This time, she won't leave me. --- LOLA'S-POV Something inside me is... wrong. I don't remember what I'm running from, only that I've always been running. My dreams are riddled with fire and a voice that speaks my name like a vow-and a threat. Then I see him. Jamie. He looks at me like he's starved for centuries. Like I'm the only thing that's ever mattered. And when he touches me, it doesn't feel new. It feels remembered. But it terrifies me. Because when I look at him, I don't see a stranger. I see my ending. And something deeper-darker-whispers: 'This isn't the beginning of our story. It's the repeat of something ancient. Twisted. And fatal.' Author's Note: Thank you for choosing to read my book. Your time and support mean more than you know. This is a fantasy-not a love story-so expect twists, power plays, and deeper truths rather than fairytale romance. I hope it pulls you in. I'd love to hear your thoughts-feel free to share your feedback in the comments!