Silent as Stars: rewrite

Two souls connected,

Intertwined like roses on a weaving, wooden archway;

This, my dear readers,

Is no fairytale.

This is the tale of a boy, and a girl,

Both just as frozen as the ice that claimed them.

Will this end in joy, and perfection?

Or in heartbreaking tragedy...

Only the moon knows;

And she is just as silent, and unspoken as the stars.

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