Choke point
  • Reads 36,782
  • Votes 7,707
  • Parts 49
  • Time 28h 5m
  • Reads 36,782
  • Votes 7,707
  • Parts 49
  • Time 28h 5m
Complete, First published May 14, 2021
~~~ Teasers ~~~


"What are we going to do now?" 

Everyone turned towards her, the same fear that was in her eyes was also in theirs. "Who's going to die next?" "Kaluku (Anyone) should just bekaiful with the question they're asking cause I as I am bayii, I can kill someone. Irú èwo Iboro oshi niyẹn? Ibeere radarada (What kind of stupid question is that?). It's your mother that will die next" Fisayo snapped pointing fingers at her.

  "Haba! There's no need for vayolence, madam be calming down" 

"Kaluku ki ọ pa enu re mo, ti ọ ba fẹ kí ayé rẹ ki ọ run (Some people should shut up If they don't want their lives to get ruined) , shut up before I do weré for you. As I am right now, my head is not correct, my sanity is gone. I can shuk (stab) somebody to death so nobody should even dasi (interfer)."

"Ki la ma se ni si yii, (What are we going to do now?) You guys are not answering" 

"Ma lo ọbẹ fi gun ọ  (I'll stab you with a knife) and I will fucking throw your fucking body in a fucking canal. Then we'll know the person that has died next, oshisko" 

All eyes turned towards Amazing who was sitting quietly at the corner.  "Amazing say something, what are we going to do. What are we going to do?" 

"What do you want me to say?" 

"Something...... Anything" 







~~~~~~~~~             ~~~~~~~~




Eight ladies in their prime search for the perfect love and happiness experience. No matter what they do, nothing can make their lives any better, it almost feels like they are all cursed . 

Is it even a curse or it's self caused? 

35 years old AmazingGrace,  swims against the tide using her faith race, hoping for love and happiness even in the midst of the chaos; against all odds and craziness and a freaking ten percent choking chance! 

Can she get out of it, will she ever overcome the madness? 









  



Dive in guys!!!



It's going to be fun!!🤸💃
All Rights Reserved
Table of contents
Sign up to add Choke point to your library and receive updates
or
#8achievements
Content Guidelines
You may also like
THE MYSTERY DREAMER by FashionabelyyyyyLate
40 parts Complete
[# 88 in TEEN FICTION on 14/3/18.] [#5 in angerissues on 10/05/2018] COMPLETED!!! No matter where you come from, your dreams are always valid. RULE 1: Never let anyone under estimate the power of your dreams. RULE 2: Always follow rule one. These were the only principles little Ria lived by. Her devoting and protective nature always came out as harsh and bitch-y. Everytime she felt threatened, her claws came out, ready to defend...to destroy. It's only you who knows the value of your dreams. So, what will she do when her exterminator walks into her life, ready to ruin everything she lives for. She fight's. A fight between two souls. ________________________________ "Who do you think you are?" she asked, bravery seeping through every syllable leaving her mouth. A devil carves fear, and when you don't give him that, he is agitated. "Your nightmare baby." he smirked as he leaned closer to her. They say never look into his eyes...he is evil. Don't cross paths with him...he is unforgiving. Never challenge him...he is destructive. But what did she do??? Every damn thing she wasn't supposed to! Add a punch to the already shaky equation and you'll find yourself amidst drama...teenage drama. Is it right to let these two souls collide? "I am not your damn servant whom you order around, get that straight through your thick skull!" with that she walked away like a pro if I may say so...leaving him staring at the place where she previously stood. When an ego is hurt, revenge is born. "Come on guys. . .we need to sort out some things," all his friends could do was watch; watch helplessly, as destruction planted it's ugly claws into their lives. A tale of destruction, misery, loyalty, friendship, trust and betrayal. "If you call yourself a dreamer, I call myself a dream-snatcher. You won't even know what hit you, little girl," he thought, as he smirked wickedly at her retreating figure. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Has mild cursing be warned!
My Happiness || Kusuo Saiki X Reader by Devilish_Lu-lu
77 parts Complete Mature
Saiki Kusuo once said to himself, "I am the world's unhappiest man who has had everything snatched away since the moment of my birth." But what happens when he meets a girl who gives him trouble from time to time. A girl who knows how to shut her mind off. A girl who actually makes him feel things he have never nor ever imagined feeling. (Your Full Name) is an only child of a businessman. Her father is barely ever there for her or ever at home. At school, she's positive, joyful and a helpful friend who helps Saiki get out of situations but at home, she's not who she puts out to be. Heck, (Name) is suicidal and because of that, she gives Saiki trouble as he can read her mind but also because it's what she mostly thinks about. Saiki never thought he would ever have a crush on anyone. He never thought it would be possible yet (Name) somehow got him to fall for her. Not to mention, she found out about Saiki's psychic powers but not all of them. || There's NO SMUT. Wattpad won't let me take off the Mature display. I guess it's in displace because the story does mention a lot about suicide. || || W A R N I N G: Talks about suicide, attempt of it and wanting to die. Talks about beliefs (religion) [I am not against nor making fun of any religion, it just for the story. I respect any belief and religions but I do apologize if I end up writing something you do not like]. Suicide is a big deal so if anyone is having suicidal thoughts, please contact someone. YOU MATTER. My DM's are open if anyone wishes to talk. Please be safe. || || Cover made by @StarBl00m ||
Before you go by meemxy
34 parts Complete
"Listen to me Qurratul Ayn, before you go, I want to know; did I ever offend you? Is my love for you too little?" I can feel his hand hovering over mine. He wants to hold it, but he knows better than to do that. "Please, I don't want to do this now. My flight is in thirty minutes." I can feel the tears wetting my Niqab. "No! I want to know. Where did I go wrong? Was it money? I didn't feed you well? I didn't clothe you? My love wasn't enough for you? I need to know, all those years! You're seriously willing to throw them away like they were nothing?" A sob breaks out but I manage to hide it behind a cough. I take a silent deep breath and turn, my Niqab swaying and making a whip sound. "It's not like, they really were nothing! Look, I don't have it in me to explain myself. You said you'd give me whatever I want? Then leave me be. I never loved you okay! I never did, it was all a sham, a facade!" His hand that was looming over mine falls limp beside him and he staggers back. "You're lying." He laughs. It's as if he's trying to convince himself. I scoff. "You think so? Well take a look at this." His eyes fill with tears and he takes one of his hands and place it on his mouth. He can't believe that it's actually true. "Okay, Fa'iza." My heart breaks. He never calls me that, ever. "I know something is wrong, and wallahi I'm going to find it out and bring you back to my house in six months. I promise." I feel my heart squeeze knowing his promise can never come to pass, ever. Death is nearing me so nothing can be done. Absolutely nothing. * Ten years of loving, doting over each other and marriage, Fa'iza upped and suddenly said she wanted out of the marriage. After months of persuasion and blackmail, Bello let her go, but before she left, he made a promise. Would he be able to fulfill this promise? STARTED: COMPLETED:
The Rise of Damola by Black_CandyK
48 parts Complete Mature
"Oya Babalawo how much will it cost?" "My son you will have to pay a hefty price for what you are asking o!" "Just tell me Baba mi and it shall be done!" "Alright then!, you will bring one pig with white head, 57 male peacocks, 45 tubers of yam, 40 sacks of kolanut and 12 strands of hair from a person that has royal blood. My son from 12 different people o!, because if you do me wayo you will become wèrè( mad person) ! "Ahhhh!!!! Baba isn't there any other option," Damola said scratching his head. "Well there is but it comes with a price!" The ritualist said with a grim expression. "Baba forget the price just talk abeg!" "You must bring....." *************************************** Damola a promising young boy who has lived his whole life in the slums grows fed up with the stigma and discrimination he's been facing for "being poor". He finally finds a way out and succeeds in creating a brand new life for himself. What happens when the effects of the atrocities that he committed in the past in order to reach the top come barging through the solid frame door of his posh new life? Will he be able to continue living fly, or will the secrets of the past lead to his undoing, taking him, the people he loves and his whole empire in the process? Read The Rise of Damola to find out🎉🎉🎉 Read if you enjoy drama, betrayal and lies with a touch of ment😹🎉 ⚠️This is a work of fiction. Unless otherwise indicated, all the names, characters, businesses, places, events and incidents in this book are either the product of the my imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
The unexpected love story [Completed] by UglyLani
21 parts Complete
Siphosethu "She will leave today with you! and we will make sure they get married tomorrow" Me"But I am only 18" My Mother hugged me, she said all she could to convince everyone that getting me married at 18 isn't fair . But my Father owed his father cows and it was only fair to give his daughter away to pay this debt . "Nje nani nibona, azange waphathwa yindoda engaze wa zekwa" "Yintombi enyulu" Yes my innocence were being paraded like it was Black Friday . Jola"Uyindoda emadodeni wena Radebe" "Bayohamba kule veki ilandelayo, beqala ubomi ubutsha bobabini. Ebe keyena unya ephangela, kodwa intombi iyakifundameza ikhaya. Ize ibentse azele abafana" Me"Tata!" My dad smiled at me, he was so proud of me for being a virgin, a virgin that will be given away to marry a guy I've never met, a virgin that will be a housewife and well give him children. Ziphozethu "Nooooo! Zee its still early " My friends believe in calling me the life of the party, they love how spontaneous I am and how carefree I am. Me"Nope, Its almost 4 you guys" The guys we were with tried convincing me with more vodka to stay. Lerato"Tshomi please stay" Me"How about we return tomorrow? drinks on me" Club literally going up on a tuesday, I am your typical nineteen year old. I rebel every now and then, I leave alone in Central Port Elizabeth . I don't remember much about my childhood or my parents, I work as a waitress at a nearby restaurant. A lot in my life doesn't make sense, but one thing I know is; I am happy and everything else doesn't matter. Two girls Two different characters One carefree One a housewife Life is not always what it looks like, and behind every smile is hardship that stays hidden. *********
Aaliyah to the World by _shatuu_
58 parts Complete
"Sarauniya!" I said almost loudly but not enough for my friend Bilal to hear, "who is she?" "Aaliyah. She's the late Alhaji Mujib's daughter. " Bilal said seeming uninterested with the topic. "Ina gidan su?" I asked, sounding a bit like a crazy stalker. "Ka kamu da ciwon so ko?" He asked as a smile spreads across his face, "They live in Asokoro district. Remember Aunty Shamsiyya? The place isn't far from your habibty's home too." "Ok, thank you. Allah ya maka albarka." "Let me know when to be expecting an invitation card." Hamza said while trying to stifle his laughter but fails woefully and I smack him on his arm as payback, joining him to laugh too. I wanted to follow her and speak to her but I heard the music start, signaling the commencement of Bilal's cousin Nadiya and her groom; Saleem's overpriced dinner party for both families. #WattysNG2020 **** This is Aaliyah's story from grass to grace as she faces obstacles created by her aunt who has done nothing but torture her since her parents death. She has managed to take the little wealth her father had left in this world and has squandered it on herself and her only daughter, Nadiya. Aaliyah's only way out is when Aunty Raliya tries to sell her off to a man who's twice her father's age but she's swept off her feet by another who's done nothing but try to make her happy. Read to know how she struggles to dodge every rock thrown her way and how she manages to reach the top victorious. Follow my Instagram: @Ayeeshatoooo Subscribe to my channel: Ayeeshatoooo
The Game of Life by TOXICTARRIE
22 parts Complete
𝘞𝘩𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘥𝘪𝘥 𝘐 𝘥𝘰 𝘵𝘰 𝘶𝘱𝘴𝘦𝘵 𝘺𝘰𝘶? Kagayaku's life has been relatively normal for the first few years, that is, until she accidentally encounters the Spirit of Life and Death herself and angered her, earning herself a curse she has to escape from constantly. With the help of friendship, Kagayaku finds herself cheating death to survive, but things are getting worse fast and the hybrid doesn't know if she will survive. ____________________________________________________________ ***** 𝑻𝒉𝒆 𝑮𝒂𝒎𝒆 𝒐𝒇 𝑳𝒊𝒇𝒆 𝑨𝑼 𝒊𝒔 𝒂 𝑾𝒊𝒏𝒈𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝑭𝒊𝒓𝒆 𝒂𝒍𝒕𝒆𝒓𝒏𝒂𝒕𝒆 𝒖𝒏𝒊𝒗𝒆𝒓𝒔𝒆 𝒄𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒕𝒆𝒅 𝒃𝒚 𝒎𝒆, 𝑨𝒏𝒕𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒔, 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒊𝒔 𝒉𝒆𝒂𝒗𝒊𝒍𝒚 𝒊𝒏𝒔𝒑𝒊𝒓𝒆𝒅 𝒃𝒚 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒐𝒏𝒈 𝒐𝒇 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒔𝒂𝒎𝒆 𝒏𝒂𝒎𝒆. 𝑻𝒉𝒆𝒇𝒕 𝒊𝒔 𝒏𝒐𝒕 𝒕𝒐𝒍𝒆𝒓𝒂𝒕𝒆𝒅. 𝑻𝒉𝒊𝒔 𝒊𝒔 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝒇𝒊𝒓𝒔𝒕 𝒃𝒐𝒐𝒌 𝒊𝒏 𝒕𝒉𝒆 𝑻𝑮𝒐𝑳 𝒔𝒆𝒓𝒊𝒆𝒔. ***** _____________________________________________________________ " 'My, what a wonderful surprise!' The hybrid felt sick to her stomach. Right next to her was Makoto, the deity that murdered these dragons. The deity that wants her head. Kagayaku quickly shuffled away from her and turned to face the deity, and her appearance was terrifying to the young dragonet. She was smirking at her, but what was worse was that she was covered head to tail in blood. 'Kagayaku! My favourite dragon in the whole world!' She chirped, sounding innocent, but the hybrid could hear that sinister undertone. 'I thought I killed you back there, with the vase. I was worried!' She exclaimed, still speaking in an innocent, sweet tone. 'But you're alive! What a miracle!' The G
Finding Yasmine by thatyorubagyal
28 parts Complete
Yasmine is a star girl, with plans for the future, good grades and a boyfriend to top it up but how can she survive when her enemies are her family, a menacing father willing to give her out without a second thought, a step mother cruel enough to be Shaytan himself and a step sister who's jealousy burns from within, a drive that's enough to kill a person. As her world comes crumbling down, will she crumble with it or stand in the midst of the rumble. _________ I'm not going to cry I'm not going to cry I'm not going to cry He chuckled wickedly as Hauwa stoked his hand tenderly. 'At first it was about your virginity but you were stubborn so I took it slow, till I got what I wanted' he said, his eyes void of emotion. 'Turns out you're easy and a slut at that' he completed as Hauwa laughed heartily. Tears fell from my eyes freely, like a waterfall, like dew on the desert. I swallowed to ease my parched throat as I bit my lips trying not to scream. My breath was becoming uneven as I strode to where he stood and slapped him across the face with all the anger, the sorrows and frustration that were bottled up on me. 'You disgust me' I managed to say as tears started to blur my vision and for a second I saw hurt in his eyes or maybe I assumed it. I ran, bumping into tables, chairs and people, I didn't care. Ammi always told me there was a thin line between love and hate and I had crossed that line today with Sadiq', the one that wiped away my tears and told me it was going to be fine, my calm after the storm was actually my enemy in disguise. Shit!!! When it rains it fucking pours. ____________ Will she loose herself or find love in the most unexpected place?
You may also like
Slide 1 of 10
THE MYSTERY DREAMER cover
My Happiness || Kusuo Saiki X Reader cover
Before you go cover
The Rise of Damola cover
SHAMBLES cover
The unexpected love story [Completed] cover
Aaliyah to the World cover
The Game of Life cover
Finding Yasmine cover
All things present  cover

THE MYSTERY DREAMER

40 parts Complete

[# 88 in TEEN FICTION on 14/3/18.] [#5 in angerissues on 10/05/2018] COMPLETED!!! No matter where you come from, your dreams are always valid. RULE 1: Never let anyone under estimate the power of your dreams. RULE 2: Always follow rule one. These were the only principles little Ria lived by. Her devoting and protective nature always came out as harsh and bitch-y. Everytime she felt threatened, her claws came out, ready to defend...to destroy. It's only you who knows the value of your dreams. So, what will she do when her exterminator walks into her life, ready to ruin everything she lives for. She fight's. A fight between two souls. ________________________________ "Who do you think you are?" she asked, bravery seeping through every syllable leaving her mouth. A devil carves fear, and when you don't give him that, he is agitated. "Your nightmare baby." he smirked as he leaned closer to her. They say never look into his eyes...he is evil. Don't cross paths with him...he is unforgiving. Never challenge him...he is destructive. But what did she do??? Every damn thing she wasn't supposed to! Add a punch to the already shaky equation and you'll find yourself amidst drama...teenage drama. Is it right to let these two souls collide? "I am not your damn servant whom you order around, get that straight through your thick skull!" with that she walked away like a pro if I may say so...leaving him staring at the place where she previously stood. When an ego is hurt, revenge is born. "Come on guys. . .we need to sort out some things," all his friends could do was watch; watch helplessly, as destruction planted it's ugly claws into their lives. A tale of destruction, misery, loyalty, friendship, trust and betrayal. "If you call yourself a dreamer, I call myself a dream-snatcher. You won't even know what hit you, little girl," he thought, as he smirked wickedly at her retreating figure. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Has mild cursing be warned!