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Reads 39,364
Votes 7,835
Parts 49
Time 28h 5m

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~~~ Teasers ~~~


"What are we going to do now?" 

Everyone turned towards her, the same fear that was in her eyes was also in theirs. "Who's going to die next?" "Kaluku (Anyone) should just bekaiful with the question they're asking cause I as I am bayii, I can kill someone. Irú èwo Iboro oshi niyẹn? Ibeere radarada (What kind of stupid question is that?). It's your mother that will die next" Fisayo snapped pointing fingers at her.

  "Haba! There's no need for vayolence, madam be calming down" 

"Kaluku ki ọ pa enu re mo, ti ọ ba fẹ kí ayé rẹ ki ọ run (Some people should shut up If they don't want their lives to get ruined) , shut up before I do weré for you. As I am right now, my head is not correct, my sanity is gone. I can shuk (stab) somebody to death so nobody should even dasi (interfer)."

"Ki la ma se ni si yii, (What are we going to do now?) You guys are not answering" 

"Ma lo ọbẹ fi gun ọ  (I'll stab you with a knife) and I will fucking throw your fucking body in a fucking canal. Then we'll know the person that has died next, oshisko" 

All eyes turned towards Amazing who was sitting quietly at the corner.  "Amazing say something, what are we going to do. What are we going to do?" 

"What do you want me to say?" 

"Something...... Anything" 







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Eight ladies in their prime search for the perfect love and happiness experience. No matter what they do, nothing can make their lives any better, it almost feels like they are all cursed . 

Is it even a curse or it's self caused? 

35 years old AmazingGrace,  swims against the tide using her faith race, hoping for love and happiness even in the midst of the chaos; against all odds and craziness and a freaking ten percent choking chance! 

Can she get out of it, will she ever overcome the madness? 









  



Dive in guys!!!



It's going to be fun!!🤸💃All Rights Reserved

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Tropes: Childhood friends to lovers, Soulmates, Twin Flames, she falls first but he falls harder (or is that the case . . .), you complete me, Tragic past, Dark Fairytale 𝙎𝙩𝙤𝙧𝙮 𝘼𝙚𝙨𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙩𝙞𝙘 https://pin.it/57WqdWXHE (copy and paste🩷) 𝙎𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙥𝙡𝙖𝙮𝙡𝙞𝙨𝙩 I found - Amber Run Panic Room - Au/Ra I'm a Mess - Bebe Rexha Lose my Mind - Dean Lewis Monster - Eminem Ft. Rihanna Demons - Imagine Dragons Experience - Ludovico Einaudi Map - Maroon 5 Fire on Fire - Sam Smith Where's my Love - SYML How to Save a Life - The Fray Dusk till Dawn - Zayn ft Sia 𝑲𝒂𝒚𝒂 𝑯𝒂𝒔𝒉𝒊𝒎𝒐𝒕𝒐 She is your typical sunshine. All bright smiles and big personalities - or at least that is what she shows to everyone else besides herself. The only person who see's her dark thoughts, numbed feelings, and painful days was him. But after her father was found to be the traitor of the Yakuza organization in the States, she is immediately labelled as the traitors daughter. An enemy, a scum. With a mother battling wit health issues, a younger sister to provide for, she begs for mercy. 𝑹𝒚𝒐𝒔𝒖𝒌𝒆 𝑺𝒂𝒌𝒖𝒓𝒂𝒛𝒖𝒌𝒊 The person the world sees is cold, manipulative, apathetic man who was the next leader of the Yakuza Organization of the states. He was seen as emotionless, even those close to him. Naturally, everyone expected him to get rid of the traitor's family. Except he didn't. He has emotions, but hides them. But there was one person who knew him better than he did and couldn't apply his logic to . . . Her. So what happens when a girl who feels too much and a boy who pretends to feels very little fall for each other and find that they complete each other when their situations pulls them apart?

Was It Meant To Be? (COMPLETED) by saimaaaaaa

#1 Mistakes - 07.07.18 #3 Spiritual - 19.06.18 #1 Mistakes - 27.08.18 #1 Mistakes - 16.10.18 #3 Inspirational - 26.10.18 #1 Inspirational- 10.11.18 #1 Mistakes - 17.11.18 #1 Sympathy - 02.02.19 He marries her. But He loves another. Her one sided love. Will fate put them to the test? Will He ever fall for Her? READ TO FIND OUT THE HARDSHIPS AND JOY THAT THE COUPLE HAVE TO GO THROUGH. [COMPLETED] _____________________________ "When are you updating next? Honestly I'm a sucker when it comes to anticipation! Can't stand it. I eagerly await the next part. I CAN'T EVEN FREAKIN SLEEP." - @iyaanaa "Amazinggggggggg chap!!!" - @iimanmaeen "Omg something smells fishy? Did she fake her death!! Hmm better put my Sherlock Holmes hat on and use my magnifying glass to solve this mystery." - @misty223 "😗😭😭😭 im so saaad... that was such a good book... i loved it... i guess all good things come to an end... this was an amzing book and i really enjoyed it ❤❤❤❤❤" - @penny612

THE MYSTERY DREAMER by FashionabelyyyyyLate

[# 88 in TEEN FICTION on 14/3/18.] [#5 in angerissues on 10/05/2018] COMPLETED!!! No matter where you come from, your dreams are always valid. RULE 1: Never let anyone under estimate the power of your dreams. RULE 2: Always follow rule one. These were the only principles little Ria lived by. Her devoting and protective nature always came out as harsh and bitch-y. Everytime she felt threatened, her claws came out, ready to defend...to destroy. It's only you who knows the value of your dreams. So, what will she do when her exterminator walks into her life, ready to ruin everything she lives for. She fight's. A fight between two souls. ________________________________ "Who do you think you are?" she asked, bravery seeping through every syllable leaving her mouth. A devil carves fear, and when you don't give him that, he is agitated. "Your nightmare baby." he smirked as he leaned closer to her. They say never look into his eyes...he is evil. Don't cross paths with him...he is unforgiving. Never challenge him...he is destructive. But what did she do??? Every damn thing she wasn't supposed to! Add a punch to the already shaky equation and you'll find yourself amidst drama...teenage drama. Is it right to let these two souls collide? "I am not your damn servant whom you order around, get that straight through your thick skull!" with that she walked away like a pro if I may say so...leaving him staring at the place where she previously stood. When an ego is hurt, revenge is born. "Come on guys. . .we need to sort out some things," all his friends could do was watch; watch helplessly, as destruction planted it's ugly claws into their lives. A tale of destruction, misery, loyalty, friendship, trust and betrayal. "If you call yourself a dreamer, I call myself a dream-snatcher. You won't even know what hit you, little girl," he thought, as he smirked wickedly at her retreating figure. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Has mild cursing be warned!

My Happiness || Kusuo Saiki X Reader by Devilish_Lu-lu

Saiki Kusuo once said to himself, "I am the world's unhappiest man who has had everything snatched away since the moment of my birth." But what happens when he meets a girl who gives him trouble from time to time. A girl who knows how to shut her mind off. A girl who actually makes him feel things he have never nor ever imagined feeling. (Your Full Name) is an only child of a businessman. Her father is barely ever there for her or ever at home. At school, she's positive, joyful and a helpful friend who helps Saiki get out of situations but at home, she's not who she puts out to be. Heck, (Name) is suicidal and because of that, she gives Saiki trouble as he can read her mind but also because it's what she mostly thinks about. Saiki never thought he would ever have a crush on anyone. He never thought it would be possible yet (Name) somehow got him to fall for her. Not to mention, she found out about Saiki's psychic powers but not all of them. || There's NO SMUT. Wattpad won't let me take off the Mature display. I guess it's in displace because the story does mention a lot about suicide. || || W A R N I N G: Talks about suicide, attempt of it and wanting to die. Talks about beliefs (religion) [I am not against nor making fun of any religion, it just for the story. I respect any belief and religions but I do apologize if I end up writing something you do not like]. Suicide is a big deal so if anyone is having suicidal thoughts, please contact someone. YOU MATTER. My DM's are open if anyone wishes to talk. Please be safe. || || Cover made by @StarBl00m ||

COLD (a nigerian story) by BeautyYoungWriter_

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