Rewriting "Advent Children" to Make Sense - "Advent Children" But Better
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Ongoing, First published Jul 12, 2022
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𝗥𝗲𝘄𝗿𝗶𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴 "𝗔𝗱𝘃𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗖𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗱𝗿𝗲𝗻" 𝘁𝗼 𝗠𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝗦𝗲𝗻𝘀𝗲 - "𝗔𝗱𝘃𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗖𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗱𝗿𝗲𝗻" 𝗕𝘂𝘁 𝗕𝗲𝘁𝘁𝗲𝗿

[Disclaimer: I'm not a know-it-all when it comes to Final Fantasy VII, so if things (places, ideas, etc.) aren't correct or aren't clarified, don't mind it.]

There were a lot of plot holes & non-logical scenes with the original 𝘈𝘥𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘊𝘩𝘪𝘭𝘥𝘳𝘦𝘯 𝘊𝘰𝘮𝘱𝘭𝘦𝘵𝘦™, so I wanted to see what I could do if I rewrote it to make sense & be more accurate to the prequels & not as much of a "stand alone" (self-explanatory). 

My friend, @SotoroBotoro12369, has also made a fanfiction with this same concept, so you can read that if you want: 

https://www.wattpad.com/story/277354070?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_Q0y%2BwZrkYHv26vuie7IQVOYdt93ZzyNcmYkCA69gVUHvnLBCwSWCODjOqlbXd2il6hUKj%2FnapPOYEBH9udrN68Vep80aAzFOOd9fyudWmTs8X2cLxipjjk%2BvPS1wzRSt

& his remastered version:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/316291371?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_originator=5Vj2BdwFpfRLrHxmo9GYwOguwIe394lxpL7LGIV2NHJ6Jr89NUWYV%2FCb4mTWWLU50gAOvdTnjKRq3jSMoDePQ1fBatRQZoK5VCbFHQoTyl9Q5uzeZZA0ItZv%2FiLCn1ne

(All characters belong to Square Enix™)
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Iii!!
[Started: 12/25/23]
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Various anime are randomly dragged to some multiversal cinema hall to watch a near omnipotent sociopath manchild with an ego bigger then the andromeda galaxy fuck over their worlds and the random nonsense he pulls put of his ass for the lulz. Go figure. "Hello, peasants. Consider it an honor to gaze upon my odyssey as i grace your filthy world with my elegant presence. You may now kiss the ground." (Disclaimer: No picture , verse or character apart from my OC belongs to me and they belong to their respective owners. My OC and this story itself is heavily inspired from TheElevatedOne's stories, so don't forget to check that out.)

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