The Girl with a Broken Mind: A The Bad Batch Fanfiction
MakenaPotter
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  • Parts 24
  • Time 3h 34m
MakenaPotter
Ongoing, First published Feb 08, 2023
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She is broken. 

  Ava 'Delta' Shand's life came crashing down right when it was at its peak. She found somewhere where she fit in. Omega was with her. Her relationship with a certain former Sergeant of the Republic growing. 
 It goes down so fast. A visit from an old friend. Betrayal and revenge. Peril and Death. 
   She is broken. 
 
BOOK #1: The Girl With A Storm In Her Eyes
BOOK #2: The Girl With A Broken Mind 
BOOK #3: The Girl With Rage In Her Soul 

NOVELLAS:
  Technically Sound
   Inevitable Destruction

(You could read this book on it's own, but I think you should go check out the first book so you aren't lost)


WARNING: I do not own Star Wars, Star Wars:the Clone Wars, or The Bad Batch. This is purely a fanfiction out of my love for the shows and movies. All credit to respected owners. I only own Delta Shand and the plot.
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