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Ace's Read And Critique
  • Reads 34
  • Votes 10
  • Parts 5
  • Time 12m
  • Reads 34
  • Votes 10
  • Parts 5
  • Time 12m
Ongoing, First published Mar 12
A little workshop for Ace to proofread and critique a writer's work.
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AHANA:The lonely soul

30 parts Ongoing

AHANA RAGHUWANSHI The soul that used once brought light in everyone's life , the cute girl that everyone once cherished and loved was now not the same anymore. She now was always serious and cold, talks only when necessary. Her chatters were no more heard . Her chuckles which was music to many ears as if now it had faded in darkness. One incident changed the lives of many. Someone lost their love for their beloved sister or that is what they thought. Someone was left in the dilemma of why their best friend left and no one stopped her . Someone lost their only daughter. Someone lost their sunshine . But in the end everyone lost one person but that loss changed many. Once loved now treated as unwanted. No one wanted it to happen but... one misunderstanding was all it took. Everyone had turned into machines... running in a loop of their schedules But what if she returns??... Not as their sunshine anymore but as a broken girl whose walls are so high that not even her best friends can break it. Will they ever understand the truth??.. Can she be herself again?? Will she get the love she misses but doesn't accept the fact?? Their princess, their sunshine is back but... is she the same innocent soul???