KRITIKA -One who cuts through enemies like warrior
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  • Reads 778
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  • Parts 13
  • Time 41m
changethedestiny
Ongoing, First published Mar 17
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A 21st century girl reached Dwaparyug for helping krishna to establish dharma .

A girl become guide to Pandavas in their journey of life 

A girl who is a student of krishna, shukracharya and vidura 

A girl whose intelligence is like KRISHNA 
 and cunningness like SHAKUNI
She is COLD yet LOVING
She is CALM by nature, but she can become AGRESSIVE if she needed.
She is EMOTIONLESS but for loving ones she have FEELINGS .
She is STRAIGHTFORWARD in speech 

A Boy who is GENTLE,JOVIAL, HUMOUROUS And CALM in nature.
He is BRAVE But LOVING  and CARING .
He is DIPLOMATIC in Speech
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