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BrokenAndTornApart

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BrokenAndTornApart

amy maxwell xxadorable1dluverxx

This heartbreak was different from other's it wasn't just emotional, it was also physical too. This one felt as if someone dropped something heavy on my chest, and it's just hurting. I have these sudden pangs in my chest, a heavy head, and extreme nausea, tingling arms, a swooping sensation in the pit of my stomach and a feeling
that everything's slowed down, as if I'm not even alive.

I sighed and plopped down into my bed face down. I rolled over slowly, and heard a knock on my door.

"Avery babe, it's time for dinner" My mom said, as I made eye contact with her.

I twisted up my mouth, and placed my hands on my stomach, closed my eyes.

"Period hun?"

I groaned, and looked at my mom.

"You can stay in your room for the next few days if you want too" My mom said.

I nodded and heard the door click.

"Finally some alone time" I grumbled into the pillow.

I couldn't go outside and just see everyone happy, and then there's me. Heartbroken, and decieved. It was to much at the moment.All Rights Reserved

amy maxwell xxadorable1dluverxx

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Just "Friends" by Savy_Perk

I felt Peter come up behind me and wrap his arms around my waist, then he slowly began trailing his lips down my neck, I was starting to become weak at the knees, then I snapped out of the trance it was putting me in just before before slipping out of his reach as quickly as possible. "Are you crazy!! I don't want your parents to walk in on us." I exclaim, feeling my cheeks start to blush. "Will you relax, they left two hours ago and won't be back until Friday, my dad's on a business trip." Peter says with a big smirk as he laces his fingers through mine "Oh, right." I say with a slight chuckle. With that Peter closed his door, and he pushed me onto the bed and began kissing me passionately, and the kisses trailed from my lips to my neck and before they could go any further, Peter stopped and looked at me with those beautiful brown eyes of his, and just smiled at me, as he ran the back of his hand along my face. "I love you Paisley." Peter says with a warm smile on his face. "I love you too." I say feeling nothing but pure joy as the words role off my tongue. And with that the moment was killed. We were after all only in high school, seniors for only 3 more days, but still only in high school, I sat up on the bed and Peter just sat there for a few moments. He looked at me for what seemed like a long time but was really only a few seconds, as he slowly went to get up off the bed, he planted a kiss on my forehead and with that my conscience had a choice. Either let the moment die or try to save it. I was going to try to save it. I grabbed Peter by his shirt and pulled him back on top of me as we fell onto the bed all over again and this time, there was not stopping, there was kissing and the whole 9 yards. Until I laid there in his bed, the sheets covering every last inch of me up out of embarrassment. Peter and I just laid there looking into each other's eyes. This kept replaying in my head during the cab ride home from the airport.

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