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Breaking Command
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  • Reads 324
  • Votes 4
  • Parts 5
  • Time 30m
Ongoing, First published Jul 10, 2012
Alexianne or better known as Alex, is one of the only girls on her brother's paintballing team. Even though she's a talented paintballer, her brother Ben and her boyfriend Dominick keep giving her a hard time for not being tough enough despite her best abilities. Then, when a sudden ambush between three paintballing team's break-out, Alex is forced to fend for herself, with the help of her partner Brooke. But when the two girl's get separated in the largest field they've ever played on, Alex becomes the easiest target to shoot. 

When the Red Team's captain Brandon, retires his rank for college, his little brother, Jason, fills in his shoes. When Alex get's caught between two rival teams without the backup of her team, Jason has no choice but to save Alex. When the two meet again, sparks fly and there's an instant connection. But with a powerful brother, a dominant boyfriend and a lovesick best friend, Alex is on her own when it comes to love. 

Can Alex betray her own team by being involved with Jason? Can she break her sensitive boyfriend's heart? She's going to need all the help she can get, and with her best friend being madly in love with her brother, there's not much help involved. Alex is a strong, funny and extremely competitive girl, but when it comes to family and friends, can she really follow her heart and break all the commands that come her way?
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The Nerd and the Jock (1st bk of Nerd Series)

44 parts Ongoing

Bailey Pierce has always been the nerd. She has always been the outcast, never asked out to anything or even had a boyfriend. Well, Bailey doesn't mind that since she has a secret, well multiple secrets that she doesn't want to share with anyone. Her secret, she lives on her own and she helps out a friend, who was suffering from addiction to crack. She has no time for boys or parties, as she was trying to get into a good school and get a good job. Bailey, or Bay as some people like to call her, is beautiful in that nerd way, well, only with the fake glasses that she wears and her hair in a ponytail. Blake Peterson is and will always be a jock and a player, known to be able to woo any unsuspecting female out of their pants.. He's the star of the basketball and football team, known to get even the best of teachers to like him. He's a C+ student who needs to get his grades up or else he can fail out of football as well as the college of his dreams. The only person that he cares about is himself and that's always how it'll be for the rest of the his whole entire life, or so he thought. However, they are about to get a wake up call when they are paired up for a project and Bailey has to tutor him. Secrets get told and a whole lot of drama comes while these two people learn then truth about what a true friend means in the time of need. _______________________________________ NOTE: IF YOU READ THIS BOOK ON ANY OTHER APP BESIDES WATTPAD THEN IT IS COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT. I GAVE NO ONE PERMISSION TO USE MY BOOK AND HAVE NOT POSTED IT ANYWHERE ELSE, SO... YA. REPORT THAT BOOK. Thanks. ~Rissa