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Attack of the Clones: Rewritten
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  • Reads 7,998
  • Votes 115
  • Parts 24
  • Time 1h 27m
Ongoing, First published Jun 19, 2016
So we all know the Star Wars prequels could have been so much better. Well I decided I could write a better love story than George Lucas did, and this is my attempt at it. Here you'll see I've only focused on scenes between Anakin and Padmé, and a few others I felt the dialogue could've been improved. I'm doing this because I loved the prequels when I was little, and I still do. I hope you enjoy! Please go read the original movie script of the scenes so you can get a good comparison.  Comments and suggestions are welcome, I'd love to hear what you think. Thanks!
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