hi girl!
hm, in the last part of "runaway" you asked if we would have anything to add in the last few chapters, and i wanted to suggest you not to make it so sad and a little melancholic about the difficulty of eating of alara. it's a great and a happy story (i think) and i wouldn't want it to take a sad turn. it's just a constructive advice, i hope you understand what i mean!
bye!! and i love your story