AliceSparkle10243

I posted the first chapter. I'm so nervous

AliceSparkle10243

Finding the right words in a book is hard. Especially when you're trying to make stuff up. Like the name of a video game in the year 2078. Which btw has not happened so I'm basically trying to write the future.
          
          but anyway. I'm pretty much done with chapter one of Cryptids of the World Set Free. Just putting the last touches on and editing. Ahhhhh!!! I'm so nervous to post the first chapter. 
          
          'Pls pls pls be good writing' is what I have been telling myself for two days.
          
          Someone pls do me or comment or something to tell me how it is. Anything I could do to change and make it better.

lemonzest13

Hey there! Thanks so much for adding Living With the Bad Boy to your reading list. I hope you enjoy it :) and I just wanted to let you know that I'm currently in the process of rewriting it (which I'll post as a new version soon), so let me know if you have any thoughts or feedback! thanks and have a lovely rest of your day :)

AliceSparkle10243

@lemonzest13 Hey! No problem, it looked really interesting. I'll try to be helpful and give feedback, even though I'm not the best at feedback. Keep doing what you're doing! Have a great day! Bye!
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