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@OhSoDebonair Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

iampaulvictor

How is Euny related to Sancret? The book states that they are brothers... If it were so..  were they of the same parents? How did Euny end up in the game? Was he sent there by his father also ? Many explanations need to be done here. 
          
          Finally in the last chapter it turns out that Euny liked N’zar but he was a man and nothing much was mentioned earlier on or after this concerning this. is there some kind of sane sex relationship allowed during that time ? If Gerent was the only one who knew about Euny liking N’zar could it be that he was closeted ?  Why was Euny referred to as ‘She’ in some chapters of the book?
          Was he a Trans? So many explanations need to be made here
              
              When Gerent asked Ia what Carack means she simply stated it means ‘Grey’ what does this actually mean? Is it a term for color in the video game?
             
             Sancret did say that he has a feeling that Morvah may soon return and it seems so because when Morval left M’zera’s body in form of a black smoke she returned to her body which means she was like a ghost maybe ? And could take over people’s bodies and N’zar, Euny and Cam did testify that when she was defeated she left in that sand form of a black smoke... could this be a clue or an early announcement for a second season or sequel ????
          
          If this were all to be a video game then the NPCs shouldn’t be able to have a mind of their own to perform all the actions done or had Artificial intelligence improved around that time of the creation of the game ??
          
          
          I do hope you see this and probably make a Part 2/Season 2 of the book
          
          (I would really like Gerent to be able to go back to the real world and continue his life)

iampaulvictor

Furthermore, I would like to ask about the mural which Gerent noticed to have a man wearing a modern watch in it which was odd as at the time in the video game none of that had been invented.
            
          This further brings me to these questions... who exactly is the man in the picture??? And why was he wearing a modern watch? Was he also trapped in the mural or something?
           Where did the mural originate from ?
          So many things seem odd with the whole mural thing as it had the ability to somehow move the images in it.
            
          At some point it was stated that it looked like Gerent and some other persons father.. what exactly does this mean ????? How does it look like Gerent when the prophecy says Hugh would be the one to fulfill it? Are high and Gerent identical twins ? Or is there something more that Sancret did not say or he wasn’t aware of ???

iampaulvictor

Hello,
          I just finished reading Carack and I must commend you on a job well done on your writing skills and the story itself it’s all amazing.
          
          (The following may contain spoilers to those who haven’t read/still reading the book)
          
          I don’t know if anyone else noticed this but While reading I did notice a few things which wasn’t quite fully explained or they may be clues to a season 2 or a sequel (hopefully) .
          Here a list of them:
          
          Firstly, I would like to begin with the accident that happens in the first chapter throughout the course of the story it was only mentioned once of how Madron was the one who tried to hit Hugh with the car in the first place.
          
          Secondly, How did Gerent get sent into a video game when he died.. nothing much was explained here as to how he got into a video game instead of some place else... and if so wherever the video game was couldn’t another player be playing it in the real world? I mean he gets trapped and nothing else is said concerning the video game as to maybe someone else playing it or why was it so that people can be sent to that game when they died or is there any other way?