CareBare56

Since I'm no longer writing 'Angels and Demons" I posted a new book.  Have a look at it. Gosh I'm bad at these 'Announcements'

CareBare56

Hello people. So I'm just thinking. I honestly hate the ship in my book 'angels and demons' with Scorpio and Libra. I don't hate the ship itself I just hate it in my book. So do you guys have any suggestions? Or I can I have a dating game in my conversations where we put the contests threw challenges to see who gets who. To get over this problem. You guys will obviously choose who wins.
          
          
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              P.S that was a joke.... Unless....

Kolyaksx_

I feel like you should do some form of love triangle between Sagittarius, Scorpio and Libra. Like both Sagittarius and Libra want Scorpio and Scorpio is torn between them and can’t choose so like in a chapter the three of them have some form of date thing and Scorpio tells the two angels who he loves ( which is Sagittarius). 
            
            I’m not sure if this works tho since I don’t know Sagittarius’s sexuality 
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CareBare56

Hello people! I don't think I have the brain power to write a chapter the week, so I'm sorry. I'll give you guys a Christmas special. It just won't be on Christmas. Enjoy yourself I'm sorry for not updating much this past month. I just can't RN but I just wanted to wish all u lovely people a happy holidays. Also happy Capricorn season.
          
          
          
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CareBare56

Hello people, I have a question for you guys, do you guys want me to address some backstories to the characters in Angels and Demons? I just want to know.
          
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CrabbyHermitCrab

@CareBare56 Oo! I would totally read those!!
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CareBare56

Hello people, honestly I'm just thinking about my book 'angels and demons' because I can't shake the feeling that some of the chapters lack in the emotions and the message I wanted to bring across. I'm not focusing on any one character anymore. I just want you people to know that some of the drama is unnecessary and is probably a little over dramatic. I wanted to push limits of what would happen if these characters from two different worlds ended up crossing and now have no choice but to trust each other. I feel like a lot my chapters lost that sense of story and I'm bringing it back and focusing on problems that other characters are having. Much like Virgo' OCD, or Capricorn's struggle with everything. I use to focus on one character and I realized that wasn't interesting. I know this a long rant and probably doesn't make any sense but I feel like I needed to address this problem. Thank you all.
          
          
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CrabbyHermitCrab

@CareBare56 No problem! Anytime!
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CareBare56

@CrabbyHermitCrab thank you for the advise i really appreciate it . I have gotten better in my later chapters so again thank you.
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CrabbyHermitCrab

@CareBare56 I have this problem too! What I've done to spice things up is (kill one of them) but you don't have to do that. You can try to focus a little more on specific people for specific chapters, but not so many that it gets confusing. So like three people at a time max. And it might also help you be able to convey to the reader the right message by focusing strongly on what they are feeling in the moment.
            I hope this helps! :)
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