The key to becoming a successful writer is to accept criticism. So, I would love to hear your opinion on how I could improve my writing. 

Favorite quotes:

"The price of freedom is high and it's the price I'm willing to pay." - Steve Rodgers

"You could inspire people in a way I never could."- Oliver Queen

"Those who love us never really leave us. You can always find them in here." - Sirius Black

"WE'VE ALL GOT BOTH LIGHT AND DARK INSIDE US. WHAT MATTER IS THE PART WE CHOOSE TO ACT ON. THAT'S WHO WE REALLY ARE."-Sirius Black

"Stop waiting for the storm to pass and learn to dance in the rain."

"Silence is golden, but when you have kids, silence is suspicious."

The Phoenix Trilogy:

1: Out of Time (complete)
2: History Repeats Itself ( Hiatus)
3: Living In His Shadow (TBA)

Other books:

Destiny(Currently writing)

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The prologue to my  new story called ‘Broken’ is up! 
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Broken (Yancy Becket) by Enigma108
Broken (Yancy Becket)
Broken. That's how Iris Potter felt. She thought being sent back in time and saving everyone would be great...
History Repeats Itself (Hiatus) by Enigma108
History Repeats Itself (Hiatus)
Sequel to Out of Time (Fred Weasley) Sirius Remus Potter is the one and only younger brother to the boy who l...
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Out Of Time (Fred Weasley) by Enigma108
Out Of Time (Fred Weasley)
Iris Evans's parents have been lying to her, her entire life. But, deep secrets have a steep price and it on...
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