hey!
i finished reading all 6 of your works, and although you haven’t seem to be active in two years, i hope this message somehow reaches you.
your work is, there is no other way to put it, truly extraordinary. reading your fics, i was so surprised by the lack of views, favorites, comments, and overall attention your work deserves. i can, and i mean this from the bottom of my heart, honestly say that “what if?” was the best drarry fanfic i have ever read, hands down (and this is coming from a person who has been reading them since 2016). the creativity of splitting the story into appropriate parts, the immaculate portrayal of setting and characters, the mix of new and well-known quotes... i am in shock that the book has only received 343k views. it deserves so much more.
that being said, i remember at the end of the previously mentioned fic, a mentioning of not being as motivated to continue the story. i am so happy that you did decide to finish it, and in my eyes, the ending was perfect. i keep rethinking about the story as a whole, and it fit in well.
i would also like to compliment the time management of the story. you managed to fit many years into one story, which is a pretty difficult task to do well in my eyes, not only that, but it didn’t feel rushed. you added yearly skips when necessary, despite the complaining from some comments. props to you, author.
like i said, i don’t know if you’ll ever get around to reading this review, but if so (and i hope you do, as to brighten your day and make you realize something very important), i want to leave you with one thing, even if you don’t take away any of the other things i am trying to tell you: you are a phenomenal writer. i pray this talent of yours did not go to waste and you continue to write outstanding works like this, whether it be on this website, or anywhere else in the world. thank you for sharing your literature with us. although others dont agree, “what if?” is a story i will always remember! :)