HermyneKhaling

Chapter three of Girl who carried the Sun is up! It's edited. For those of you who might not realize it yet. I've edited the book quite heavily. Some of you might get a feel that you're reading a new book.
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/122027522

Aneta_Ahona

I was reading Yours Raven again and I suddenly realised I don't know in which year they are living?  I mean ehich year is going on in the book?  Please please reply.

HermyneKhaling

@Aneta_Ahona 2018, 19
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HermyneKhaling

Chapter three of Girl who carried the Sun is up! It's edited. For those of you who might not realize it yet. I've edited the book quite heavily. Some of you might get a feel that you're reading a new book.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/122027522

HermyneKhaling

Okay, guys
          
          Here's an announcement. “Yours, Raven” has entered the Paid Stories program which means, in a while, you won't be able to read Nick and Raves' story for free. This is an opportunity for me to take the book to the next level, which I think is rightly deserving of Nick and Raves :) They've been here free for quite a long time now, and yet I mourn with you ❤
          But you still have some time. If you're reading the book now, you know what to do. Read it and lemme know what you feel. Tell me how much you love them (:
          
          With lots and lots of love from Raves and Nick and Me. Thank you so much for constantly supporting us from the very beginning to this day, and for the time to come. You (yes, I'm talking to you) are the best. We love you ❤❤
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/90665606

_saranghanu_

@HermyneKhaling congratulations!
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HarryPoppins101

@HermyneKhaling I truly think u deserve that much
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vibhamehts

@HermyneKhaling you described everything so perfectly. I'm so happy for you. You deserve it, my love. All the very best! 
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TomboyCanLovePinks

Hey! Just wanted to ask if The girl who carried the sun a happy ending for Daniel and Lily? I want to read the story!<3

SparksAndGlows

Dear HermyneKhaling, I know English is not your first language but can you use simpler English words if possible? It’d be better to understand your stories in one go rather than rereading some sentences (not all).  Using simple and brief words and some straight to the point actions  and not beating around the bush to make longer sentences would make some of us your readers reading your stories a bit easier.. 
          I’m a fan actually  but sometimes it’s a bit  difficult to comprehend some terms you’re using in some of your sentences.  

HermyneKhaling

@SparksAndGlows Okay. Actually, these are all common words. You would find 'transfixed' on many other novels as well. Lusty is also commonly used as an adjective to describe trees and forests. "Comb through the jungle" is an English phrase. I agree it's something you won't find very often on wattpad. Yeah. I played with words on the first paragraph. This is because I decided to write this book slightly different from my other books, go about it somewhat like the old-timers. But I assure you, it won't get harder. I'll ask around a few of my friends too if they find it hard to comprehend. Then I'll get back and make the necessary changes. Thank you so much for letting me know.
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SparksAndGlows

Just some of your sentences but not all.. I understand that sometimes you have to use metaphors or simile or idioms.. but if you could make it a bit simpler that would be more awesome.  I’m just as excited with this story bcoz I’m a hopeless romantic and indeed you made me cry with Yours Raven.  
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SparksAndGlows

First sentence of Chapter 1
            Transfixed
            Lusty Hills
            Comb through the jungle 
            
            
            C
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HermyneKhaling

Hey all!
          This is not a new book. This is what you previously read as Hey, Little Lady. I took it down for rewrite. Now I have also changed the title and I'm gonna upload each chapter one by one. Happy readings (:
          
          Love, Hermyne ❤
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/122027522

HarryPoppins101

@HermyneKhaling you are always welcome
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HermyneKhaling

@HarryPoppins101 thank you ❤
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HarryPoppins101

@HermyneKhaling oh okay I was really interested in that one coz it looked really good but all of your books look good to read.
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hajjahgololo

Hey!how are you doing and all,I just wanted to ask if you can please update signed Gaius,because I'm really in love with that book,as you might have guessed I have already read yours raven and I'm reading the sequel, I would really love it if you could update it♥️

Himanshi67

Raven & Nick's story is so touching ans full of emotion... i love it relate to it. Plzz continue with the sequel to...    take your time but plz consider it...

HermyneKhaling

@Himanshi67 thank you so much for reading! Will continue but might take time because of college final year
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JannatF61

Where do I even begin to express my love for "Yours, Raven"?! Though you might have already guessed by the crazy flow of notifications from me..LOL! I wish I didn't keep it abandoned for so long & read it way earlier! I LOVED LOVED LOVED it. I have been binge-reading it for the last two days cutting down my sleep time! I love it when a book it written in a big, grandeur canvas and allows be to travel through time and places while turning pages! I loved the backdrop of the story..it felt so refreshing. Coming to the characters..I am now so deeply in love with Raven & Nick! Raven is such a sweet, juvenile yet mature soul..I love her to the moon and back. & Nick..boy oh boy! Just when I thought I couldn't fall for another fictional male character, this boy came, raised the bar so high & threw me off the cliff! :P I HIGHLY RECOMMEND this book ❤️ You are such an AMAZING writer ❤️
          P.S. I wanted to read your other stories but my heart broke a little when I found "Silhouette" is a paid story and others are not completed yet! :'(

HermyneKhaling

@JannatF61 thank you so much for reading and the appreciation. ❤ I'm working on the other stories as well, hopefully you'll enjoy them too (: 
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