Kpoppingmate

I'm reviewing past chapters of Knowing Girl quickly and changing some awkward phrasing. 
          	
          	Sometimes it's easy to see where there need to be changes after you leave the writing to sit for a while and you develop your style. 
          	
          	The latest chapter of Knowing girl I'm quite happy with since it seems to flow nicely about halfway in, though that could just be because there is literally no speaking lmao
          	
          	( Reviewed the first 4 chapters so far :) )