MelMen066

Hey, everyone. I know this is exam season, but my school will be done with it by this week. I've been thinking about starting another [Pokemon girl] x Reader book (not sure if it'll be long or short) soon. I tend to write few stories because I don't like starting things I can't finish, but I think I have it in me to write a whole story again. The character will be chosen from @Necessary_Chaos ' selection (whose PokeGirls Imagines book is great, go check it out) and I'll see who gets the most votes by Monday next week. Hope to see everyone there!

VileMaverick

Yo I liked the Cynthia story but had an issue, like Saturn's part in the story, the parts leading up to it was pretty good and I heard you weren't gonna continue it, will there be a chance you might redo it in the future. Cause I kinda want to see where it'll end up.

MelMen066

@VileMaverick without a shadow of a doubt, I might give him even more personality the 2nd time around
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VileMaverick

@MelMen066 If you do go through with it, is larvitar still gonna be the best boi?
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MelMen066

@VileMaverick I'll take it into consideration (and honestly am kinda embarrassed how I just left it there) so thanks for the suggestion
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MelMen066

Hey, everyone. I know this is exam season, but my school will be done with it by this week. I've been thinking about starting another [Pokemon girl] x Reader book (not sure if it'll be long or short) soon. I tend to write few stories because I don't like starting things I can't finish, but I think I have it in me to write a whole story again. The character will be chosen from @Necessary_Chaos ' selection (whose PokeGirls Imagines book is great, go check it out) and I'll see who gets the most votes by Monday next week. Hope to see everyone there!

godofbadfanfics

Hello! I've read your pokemon story a while back and I hope it's still being worked on, because I'm eager to read what comes next. If not then I understand, I know what it's like to be busy and to get writer's block. 
          
          Some feedback I have is to go back to tighten up some minor writing and story inconsistencies if you can. Even though the story is in second person, I found some first person pronouns sprinkled around in some of the earlier chapters. Something I noticed in Chapter 10 is when "Pupitar and Ralts burst out of their pokeballs," Ralts was already out carrying the map since the start of the chapter. Was it actually meant to be Cynthia's Togepi to come out of the pokeball? So far, those are what I noticed. Those didn't bother my reading experience since I enjoyed the story itself so much. 
          
          Overall, I found this little story pretty cute and I really liked it. I hope to read new chapters one day, keep up the good work!
          
          Side note: although I could have used my actual name for the protagonist, I preferred to give him his own name. I chose Oliver and Orion, and Cynthia calls him Ollie or Ori as a nickname. I can't decide between the two so which would you prefer? Oliver&Ollie or Orion&Ori? (sorry if any of these happen to be your name.)

MelMen066

@godofbadfanfics Hey, thanks for the follow! And I appreciate your feedback on my story. I'm guilty of your criticism of the inconsistency.
            
            As for the story, unfortunately, I don't think I'll be continuing it. I've spent a lot of time improving my writing skills since I stopped updating this book, and I even have another story published recently. But when I read how my Pokémon story was, I noticed that it was already too mangled and jumbled to fix grammatically, much less structurally. My apologies. That being said, I know the disappointment of having a piece of work you enjoy being cut off unceremoniously.
            
            I would say that I do have something in mind to make up for it. I could write a series of short stories and arcs about Cynthia or the other girls in Pokémon. I haven't been too much into Pokémon lately, but I still have a strong emotional connection to the series, and so I don't want to leave it behind.
            
            If people enjoy the things I write, then the least I can do is give them a proper good time. I'd like to show everyone that I haven't been slacking with improving my writing. So yeah, I definitely will write some more Pokémon content once I get my exams over with.
            
            Again, thank you for having a good time with my work. It's really nice to hear that people care enough about it to write a whole review. I'll do my best! If you'd like to read another one of my stories in the meantime, check out Kyoto Zero! I want to write some more JJK content as well.
            
            P.S. Orion sounds more like a canon name in Pokémon, since it follows the star themed names of DPPt (Cyrus = Sun, Cynthia = Moon).
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