TheDarkGamer123

I’VE PUBLISHED MY NEWEST CHAPTER FOR THE SPIRITS OF THE UNIVERSE! Please check it out, and tell me if  you like it:)

TheDarkGamer123

@Neptunes_Rhytm Hey, thanks for the kind words. Unfortunately, I don't currently have a plan to write a sequel. However, that might change in the future :)
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Neptunes_Rhytm

@TheDarkGamer123 can you make a sequel to “the Moons’s shine” I personally think it’s better than the silver ring and the gold amulet combined..
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TheDarkGamer123

Thanks for the kind words :)
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TheDarkGamer123

I’VE PUBLISHED MY NEWEST CHAPTER FOR THE SPIRITS OF THE UNIVERSE! Please check it out, and tell me if  you like it:)

TheDarkGamer123

@Neptunes_Rhytm Hey, thanks for the kind words. Unfortunately, I don't currently have a plan to write a sequel. However, that might change in the future :)
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Neptunes_Rhytm

@TheDarkGamer123 can you make a sequel to “the Moons’s shine” I personally think it’s better than the silver ring and the gold amulet combined..
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TheDarkGamer123

Thanks for the kind words :)
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Sonofthanatous

This is a reply to your reply of my comment on your recent book. the Percy you have is great, his main problem is that he is too brooding and he struggles to fight enemies that are not as powerful as you make them out to be, in “the moon’s shine” nico says that Percy has power that rivals Olympians but before that he struggled to beat a hydra even with help. Your fights are ok, it’s just that they aren’t convincing enough to show Percy’s display of fighting and ability prowess, one thing some writers forget is that a fight isn’t all swords or abilities, a good fight displays an effective use of abilities and swordsmanship (you do this pretty fine by yourself though). Percy’s most common traits are: his loyalty (obviously) his care, his sass, and his love. Your books do pretty good at telling a story but sometimes you stray away from Percy having his solo main character moment when he could make a sassy comment or show his care for others. In your most recent book you made him very broody, though I’ve never been through as much as he’s been through so I don’t know how he feels. One last thing, can you please try to scale Percy a bit better in future books, what I mean is: if Percy could go toe-to-toe with Olympians than he should be able to take on many powerful foes with ease

TheDarkGamer123

@Sonofthanatous Thanks :). I appreciate taking time out of your day to write this.
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Sonofthanatous

Also I forgot another thing. You make Percy a bit to clumsy and it ends up being repetitive and predictable when he’d mess up, I get that Percy isn’t the luckiest character or the most fluent person but his clumsiness is made as a humor thing not a continuous thing. (But I’m not shaming any of your books. You make excellent works that stand out on their own, these are just small bits of constructive criticism to help you make better books in the future. Hope this helps!)
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AnshD02

Is their a sequel to The Moon's Shine? I was so confused by your annoucement.

TheDarkGamer123

@AnshD02 Hey, I haven't thought that far ahead yet. I'll probably make a poll once I'm halfway done with SotU :)
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AnshD02

Are u going to make a new pertemis book after finishing The Spirits of the Universe?
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TheDarkGamer123

@AnshD02 There will not be a sequel. However, my next book will be a continuation of an old book, The Spirits of the Universe. Sorry for any confusion that might've happened :)
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Sup846

Hey if you want an editor I’ll be glad to. I’m still in high-school but I’m really good with writing. I write stories in my spare time but I don’t have the courage to post them. If you want proof I am in honors English class.

TheDarkGamer123

@Sup846 Hey, sorry for the late response--please send me a private message if you're still interested :)
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TheDarkGamer123

Hey, Wattpad family!
          Don't worry—I'm not going on vacation (at least not yet XD). Tomorrow is going to be a very special release. Yup, you heard that right—I'm releasing the prologue of my NEW book. This is going to be an new endeavor for me, as this one will not be a Percy Jackson fanfiction—I'll be dipping my toes into the non-fanfiction world! Anyway, I'm not giving up on Percy Jackson, but please do read it and comment if you like it or not. I'd really appreciate it. If all goes well, updates will be slow but consistent. Love you guys!

TheDarkGamer123

@Elijah_RL Thanks for the support! You can go check it out if you wish :)
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Elijah_RL

@TheDarkGamer123 ooh, that sounds interesting!! I love your writing, I'll enjoy reading some of your original work!!
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