ScarlettBlackburn

Hi. If you want take a look at my new book!!!  You won't regret it I can promise.  If you're going to be able to finish the story without a broken heart and tears in your eyes that I can't promise anymore.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/345695729?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ScarlettBlackburn&wp_originator=MphjKOlY0bn2%2F5d01iZ5MzEzpkjQym5%2F8eYcm4lD6MTsLb2KwITDl4Bgk6dAv7rgnSiJqI4h3xwgqPzCwXitPuVWH2CS4%2Bpj2s1pOmDJG%2FCo6KNQxZEKzkkN261ApBQp

LouiseDodd

Hi, I sent you a private message on Wattpad regarding converting some of your amazing stories to audiobook, I was wondering if you have had a chance to decide whether or not you would be interested in giving me copyright permission?
          I would of course promote any forms of social media you have and the story would always be your content, if you could let me know it would be greatly appreciated. here is a link to my channel so you can see some of the other wattpad stories and authors i have covered: https://www.youtube.com/c/MrsManicsRandomReadsAudiobooks

You_Are_AmazingS2

Hi! You're amazing! :)

You_Are_AmazingS2

@ Mrs-Lhama  how was you day?
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You_Are_AmazingS2

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Trash_Queen_33

@ToDeOlhoHein Umm... Thank you. Hi *Shy Wave"
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pclvn1

I think 1 thing that will make this story better is clarifying the time frame of events. As I read it, it was like everyday an event happened and there wasn't much relationship build up with her and the other rides except Ty. There was moments when it appeared they knew each other more than the time frame suggested. Only once did I learn a month had passed when I thought it was less than a week. 
          
          All it really needs is some form of transition to clarifying the timeline better. Also you switched roy with ray alot in the story plus some grammatical errors. However all in all it is good, still waiting for ending.