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(pt.2)
Seriously, it's just THAT GOOD that it ruined other books for me. I've tried picking up quite a few since then and they just feel fucking bland, or they're okay but it stops there. I feel the difference. I HATE YOU
Each chapter that was closer to the end had me dreading it, feeling the impending doom that was about to go through meeee. And when I finally finished it I just didn't quite know what to do with myself for a solid week. Like, how do you top that?
Now that I'm pondering it, the fact that I was new to Modern Warfare and basically knew nothing of it probably made the experience that much vivid for me as I had no knowledge of the storyline and shit, just basic knowledge of the 141, good on me!
It makes me think that if you were to change names and relatables and such, ya could probably have it published... It's worthy of it. Sure, it'd be some work to work around all the obvious parts that make it COD©️... But I believe it's very much achievable!
The only things that I can think of even tho it's really not that big of a deal, is that maybe I would've loved to hear more about Gaz throughout the story? Have him more included, Price too? Jamie's mom aswell? But that's my very detail-seeking brain speaking.
Also, the TW's at like every begginning of the chapters are sooo telling, it kinda takes away the surprise effect. I try to scroll over it but sometimes my eyes would catch a few words then i wouldn't be able to stop myself and I'd just read the entire warning.
That's on me for not being to totally skip over them.
Well, I think that's all for now. It took me a good hour to write all that and try to not sound out of my mind (I probably failed! ).
I've recommended your books to those whom i know would be interested, and I'm waiting for literally anything else from you. If you got something to throw at us, please do! I'm sure I'm not the only one longing for more.
Okay, love you, bye
WAT, out